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By : AislingSiobhan
  • From ANON - Kell0ee on April 20, 2013
    This is the best Loki/Harry I have come across yet. I really love how you mentioned loki's other children that he birthed, a lot of people fail to mention them :)
    I think you were right to have Thor be a total arse, quite a few authors tend to forget he changed a lot after visiting earth for the first time.
    A++!
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  • From ANON - harryhollow1@yahoo.com on July 27, 2012
    What to say other then that this is AWESOME you should have Odin and Thor to visit Harry and Loki plus all their kids and try to get them into a three some Thor future king with Loki as Queen and Harry as a Queen!!

    This really is good please please write one more chapter or a sequel this is one of a kind please think about it please it doesn't have to be long but please email me if you do!! :D

    Oh, just think Thor is watching how happy the two couple are with their son and the next baby their about to have and Thor's parents get upset cause Thor's so sad and depressed even after knowing he's going to become king or his king! He Thor doesn't have a Queen by his side or anyone!!

    Loki is both a Sub/Dom and will Harry is a sub so the Father Odin will try to find away to make everything right which won't be a good thing for Loki and Harry!

    Odin would be like for the greater good of his only real son to not be so coldly to everyone and depressed nor angry at everyone around him no longer being able to have daily fights with his adopted brother loki not living there with his famiy his son thor is fighting with odin his guards or little things or at those who in court that would say mean things about his brother loki or harry!

    Odin Self Realization that most of the time Thor is not just longing for harry potter but for his brother loki whether his son realizes or not as thor's father starts to really think that Thor picking on Loki all the time thought is love for loki was just brotherly love looking back at that Odin come to a decision to right the wrongs he done even if everyone doesn't like it he is king and will do want ever he won't and that which he wants is his son loki back and harry with their son and the other baby on the way!

    Odin looks into either himself or sends one of his book smart servent undercover to get more information on the earths magical race of wizards more for information on birthing and about harry potter which his servents come back with in the week or two with everything the king asked for plus a ritual for three male lovers to have done to combine them together to form a tri relationship with one Dom top, one Dom/sub, and the last male would be fully sub (harry) which the spell would cause the male to get mpreg wizards like harry would have all three males dna plus his into a baby!

    And or Odin can make Thor and Loki have a full god together later on but with harry's wizard human dna
    combine with the male god thor and loki giant gene will be a god either way as a father Odin wants every thing back to the way it mostly he just wants both his son by his side some what happy he thinks is would alright after all should his son the future king have more then one Queen!

    Thor will be happy Odin thinks that loki and harry won't be happy bond fully to his true son Thor but over time they will be great fully to him for giving them the honor of being Queens to his son living on their beautiful home world and not that ugly world called earth!!



    Sorry got over done write to much of this please please continue this!!
    I'm a reader not a writer as you can tell above this sentence I just don't have the patients or skill in writing or spelling!!

    I beg of you let me know what you think or what you decide to do later on months from now is you do write some more or different stories I'll read your stuff life I doing right now read some of your other stories that I've notices I've read before one or twice like years ago but going to reread!!!

    Gonight or is it good morning! :D :D :D
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  • From ANON - Antybioda on July 06, 2012
    Simply an amazing story. I read it some time ago, but forgot to review it, so I can't say much more than that. I love the way you present Harry's and Loki's relationship. As something precious and worth fighting for and working to better it. Like a story with a perfect happy ending, this brought me to tears ;)
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  • From sesshyfreak on June 22, 2012
    I was very skeptical about this story at first. I cannot stand most crossovers, and it's probably hypocritical of me, but I generally stay away from them because most are poorly written. This work of fiction that I read was nothing short of amazing. You are extremely talented, and can't wait to read more of your work.
    I was moved to tears on more than one occasion, and the plot flowed together so smoothly, it was as if the two fandoms were meant to be together all along. I do like best how this was pre-Thor, and the way you captured their... pre-lesson personalities fantastically. Adding in the part with the runes and actually teaching me things were an extra bonus I always like to see.
    In short, thank you with all of my heart for this spectacular piece of work, and I do hope that all of my fandom-sharing friends will enjoy this as much as I have, because I sent a few the link.
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  • From ANON - Sivy on June 18, 2012
    Great fic! Can't wait to read your avenger fics! I would love to see a continuation of this fic with the avenger movie, obviously it will have to be very different from the movie since I don't think Harry would be happy if loki tried to take over earth...
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  • From ANON - Nitya on June 06, 2012
    I loved it
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  • From jessebarbieheart on June 05, 2012
    I don't normally read crossovers, but for some reason this one caught my eye. It's intriguing and beautiful. Paints such a vulnerable picture of Loki, showing very well his obsessive need to be loved over Thor. Wonderful. Definitely a new favorite :)
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  • From ANON - arwinurban on June 02, 2012
    This was so great!! I loved the story line so much!!!!! So cute too!
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  • From ANON - Anon on May 23, 2012
    I loved it.
    This is one of the best crossover's I've read.
    Loki is such a charismatic and torn character that I never considered him 'the bad guy'.
    Harry/Loki romance.
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  • From bloodshound on May 23, 2012
    this was a really wonderful story, ty for sharing it. not only was it well written but everyone was in character and it was completely feasible. for once Loki gets exactly what he wants with out the risk of the world going pop. He gets his happy ending.
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  • From kyuubifreak on May 22, 2012
    wow, i love the story!! i wish you continue this story in a way! I want to see them have more kids, lol..
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  • From Selene89 on May 22, 2012
    Absolutely Awesome. There are not enough good Harry/Loki fics but i have one of the best ones I've read. Bravo.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on May 22, 2012
    i do hate that you killed teddy they would have been together besides fire that the muggle make only tickle true wizards and witch's magic fire is the only thing that would kill
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  • From Tesgura on May 22, 2012
    I wasn't in the mood for a crossover but I caught the name of this and recognized it as a rune and it had me curious, and now I'm so glad I read this. It was an excellent portrayal of Loki and how he would fall in love, and brilliant expressive Harry. I was ready to kill Odin when he started lying same as I often want to kill Dumbledore in so many stories. Excellent writing, bravo!
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on May 22, 2012
    So good all ican say is to short i want to watch harry go back for odin to see his grandson and thor to eat his heart out love it want more
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