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Reviews for The Ultimate Betrayal

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  • From Kaiela239 on May 03, 2022

    This is amazing, please continue.


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  • From Calmzone1 on January 05, 2016
    good start, I'd be curious to see where you take it
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  • From ANON - Sonnenfrost on June 07, 2014
    I Love both versions of this story wether he returns to being eleven or fourteen. Both stories are in fact the best of their kind.
    Though this story has a major difference to the other version.
    The relationship between Harry and Arae seems much smoother. I thought it strange that Harry would be so casual about the goddess, considering the second chance and all.
    the fact that Harry is already sorted should make him quite charming for the masses.

    Another point is the moment to which he returned.
    Harry sure got the perfect moment to return - he is already no longer speaking with Ronald and the most part of the school and there is the Jule Ball which he can use to show his preference of male companions. He could ask Blaise, as he is both a neutral wizard and quite good looking. This way the girls would back off.

    I hope you find the inspiration to finish your story. Letting it be like this would be sad.
    I look forward to the day you decide to update.
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  • From ANON - Jeane on April 16, 2013
    this is so interesting :) Would you be continuing? It was written good and I had a nice time reading it. Pls update soon!
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  • From ANON - Diana on March 29, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From ANON - secrettheshadow on November 27, 2012
    This is an interesting idea and i wish to read more. please update soon.
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  • From kmoaton on October 24, 2012
    This is so totally different than your version on FF.net! I think I'll love them both for very different reasons!! Can't wait to see more of this one too!
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  • From ANON - Stephanie on August 15, 2012
    sweet!!! i hope you update soon i'm so looking forward to your rewritten work!
    is there a way i can get alerted for your next update? if so may you please tell me?
    please update soon! n_n
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  • From ANON - BookWorm230 on August 12, 2012
    Can't wait for the next chapter : )
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 05, 2012
    Such an amazing story. It's changed slightly from the original though I see. Sorry if I offend but I kinda like this version a little better so far. Please update soon. xx
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  • From Lady_Arachne on July 20, 2012
    *grins* I hope you continue this!! I love it when Harry talks in Parseltongue instead of ignoring it!

    *grins* Update soon!!
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  • From jujukitty on July 14, 2012
    first, love the name lol. second, really loving the story so far. i've read a few time travel stories, but i like the concept behind this one and i can't wait to see how things progress with arae along for the ride and how different harry's attitude is goign to be. keep up the great work, i'm looking forward to more :D
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  • From Lemrinth on June 24, 2012
    Nice plot. I do look forward to the updates. Though, since I am new here I do not know how to keep track of this story...
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  • From jami_lee on June 22, 2012
    I like this story!! You are very talented writer. I enjoy reading your stories. You have away of pulling a reader in.
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  • From beroati on June 22, 2012
    I have to say I like this version better than the FF one, not that I didn't like that one either but this is a lot more intriguing than the first one. I am eagerly anticipating for your next update.

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