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Reviews for The Dark Lord and the orphan

By : Meinouda
  • From Dhalim on August 18, 2022

    I look forward to seeing where this goes. It's a shame you removed this from FF.net


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  • From Lady_Arachne on July 20, 2012
    *grins* Wonder how the Dark Lord would take that Harry is a squib and not a muggle like he thinks he is!! *snickers* I hope Harry doesn't get killed for hiding that fact!!
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  • From Lady_Arachne on July 20, 2012
    *grins* Hmm, I think that this story will be interesting!

    I liked the part "If he asked you to dance naked.."! I kept imagining Harry doing that while Voldemort watches! *snickers* Although, everytime I imagine it, Harry has a slightly big ass. *grins*
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  • From bloodshound on June 26, 2012
    indeed. they need to learn what the other requires. still there were a few typos. Just little ones like using the wrong tense on a word. anyway, it's still coming along nicely.
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  • From Jan on June 26, 2012
    So far I find this story to be intriguing, I can't wait to read more ^_^ Please update chapter 10 soon.


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  • From bloodshound on June 23, 2012
    and now the true relationship begins. I hope you do it justice.
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  • From Danyealle on June 19, 2012
    Upon review of your story, it was noticed that you cite/quote from another source, but that it is not properly cited.

    Please read the below listed FAQ, for the format that is needed.
    http://www2.adultfanfiction.net/forum/index.php?showtopic=15097

    Should you, the author use extensive quotations and references, footnoting would be best in that for instance.

    Thank you for your cooperation.

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  • From bloodshound on June 15, 2012
    interesting. I wonder if har is indeed a squib or somehow just blocked?
    nice to see malfoy is as much of a twat as usual.
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  • From Kitkatislovely95 on June 14, 2012
    This is a great story so far. I'm so excited to see what happens next. Please update soon. :)

    xoxo,
    kitkat
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  • From bloodshound on June 13, 2012
    I fail. I didn't know the quote... it did amuse me though. >>
    Nothing more frustrating that everyone knowing a secret about you than you. Maybe har will get some answers... then again, knowing V, maybe not. :P
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  • From Lizzosaur on June 12, 2012
    Great job.

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  • From bloodshound on June 12, 2012
    i reckon there's a fascinating back story lurking and i look forward to learning it as it's slowly revealed.
    poor blue, i sometimes wonder if it wouldn't be better to be dead than a slave.
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