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Reviews for Renati Vitam

By : LadyMoon
  • From TopazDragon on May 18, 2014
    I did say I would be looking at other stories. I do enjoy some time travel fics, but only if they aren't the same. This is very unique... and it's not even a true time-travel story. I don't think a potion counts if it's the life you were meant to have. Anyways, I just love that you had a different spin, the girls don't remember a previous life, nor will they go blabbering to someone about it. It's just refreshing and I love the play of characters you're showing us and how that will change the future of the four misfits, Snape and Evans.

    Currently, I'm a Remus/Luna fan in this fic since I feel like slapping Sirius... I don't know if the pairing change was in the summary or not, but really, I just love Luna with either.

    Ginny... I could see her with James. He seems more the character for Ginny's fire. I just love the two girls, both interesting. Ginny is full of fire and Luna is the calm, both with passions and strengths they rely on each other four. I love the friendship between them and the other two, along with the Snape/Lily pairing.

    I am so eager to read more. I was laughing even as I was imagining how bamf our two girls are... And I like how you bring out the one point most seem to forget about the Maurauders... they were bullies. Giant pricks in need of attention and bigots in their own rights. Sirius knew Luna before but since she went to Slytherin... yeah, I did mention wanting to slap him right?

    So in love with this! Can't wait till the next chapter!
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on January 18, 2013
    ohh I see Drama in the very near future lol.
    I can't wait to see what Remus' friends are going to say and how jealous sirius will be!!!
    I reallyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyyy can't wait till the next chapter and see how the White Ball goes :D
    post more sooooooooooooooooooooon please
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  • From ANON - Aeris on October 13, 2012
    I'm liking to where the story is going so far!
    Will Ginny continue with her crush on Yaxley? I'm looking forward also how this will go ... I would like to see how you will make James fall in love
    with Ginny because they are enemies right now (btw, the hex that transformed Sirius in a girl was so funny! When you mentioned his period I laughed aloud)
    Keep the good work =)
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  • From ANON - chell on October 09, 2012
    Yea put her with Remus or maybe a 3some. Remus is hot but so is sirius. Update soon
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on October 08, 2012
    Those two boys are such arses.
    I'm kind of all for Luna getting close to and maybe with Remus. He's the only nice one in the bunch.
    I can't wait to find out who Ginny gets a crush on.
    Post more soooooooooooooooooon
    pwetty pwease with whipe cream and chocolate sauce on top!!!
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  • From ANON - Juls on October 08, 2012
    Really enjoyed it, especially the hecing and the depth you have given Luna. Can't wait for the next one :)
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  • From ANON - chell on September 28, 2012
    Love it!!!!
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on September 27, 2012
    Oh how I really don't like how Sirius is acting when he's around his friends.
    Why can't he choose his own friends.
    He was super mean to poor Luna who has done nothing to hurt him or anything.
    I really hope Luna or Ginny get back at him for what he said and how he acted.

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  • From ANON - Aeris on September 09, 2012
    This story is very original! I loved this.
    I liked that you kept Ginny and Luna's friendship intact and that they are loved by their brothers.
    Ginny/Cissy/ Bella's conversation is hilarious !
    I'm looking forward the next chapter and how ginny and james will be meeting for the first time.
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  • From Tinkerbabe7 on September 06, 2012
    Wow this really is a spin on things.
    I love that Ginny and Luna are best friends still.
    It's cute that Lucius is so fond of his sister and Ginny's sisters are fond of her.
    Sirius makes me laugh, he's soooooo adorable.
    I can't wait to see how James will fit in.
    I'm really liking it and already becoming addicted. :D
    I really hope you post more soon
    like REALLY soon lol

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  • From ANON - aviendha on August 22, 2012
    Hi! Nice story so far. :) About the Latin: the correct phrase would be 'vita renata', the noun coming before the adjective and both in first person singular. Although I can't say if the Romans would have ever coined this exact phrase, I've never come across it before in my 8 years of Latin in school (admittedly, that doesn't really say anything LOL).

    Hoping to read more soon!
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  • From ANON - rae on July 24, 2012
    the story is good so far, can't wait to see where you take it
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