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Reviews for The Distance In Your Eyes

By : Pfeifenkraut
  • From Jkarr on July 13, 2022

    Know its being nearly a decade since this has being updated, but desperatly hopeing there is a version out there somewhere, that has being. Anyone know?


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  • From morningstorm70 on August 04, 2020

    Please say u r continuing this fic

    Send me update notification if u can please 


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  • From LeilanaSirana on August 02, 2019

    Hey,

    I just found this story and I am so happy.

    I love the pairing, I love the storyline, I love everythging about this.

    I am looking forward to see how good or how bad Harry will act on his first moon.

    I hope this story will continue soon. :)


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  • From ANON - Josie on April 16, 2015
    hey just finished reading this story and i thought it was amazing i loved it i am so curious as to how fenrir made it inside and what is going to happen next i am waiting for your next chapter
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  • From benwitty on July 17, 2014
    I absolutely love this. I haven't met many fenrir/harry stories I'm captivated by, but this works great!
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  • From littlepanther on May 19, 2014
    I LOVE YOUR STORY!!! please update! I'm looking forward to the rest of the chapters!
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  • From ANON - Isha on December 15, 2013
    Happy halloween really???. is Happy Christmas and New Year omg please updated i love the story I read it in 3 days pleaseee =D
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  • From ANON - Fru on October 31, 2013
    Really? We wait that long for a chapter, and nothing. happens. Nothing happened in this chapter. Nothing. They talked for a minute, that's it. You might as well have not put this chapter out at all if you weren't even going to try to advance the story. I'd rather have waited another few months and see actual progress, than be insulted by this placeholder you threw out. It's like you said 'oh crap, it's been too long, better just put out something that doesn't mean anything and does nothing for the story'. This chapter could have just been added to the previous one. As a reader, it's insulting. I don't mind waiting forever and a day for a new chapter, as long as that chapter is worth the wait.

    This chapter was not worth the wait.

    And the 'life is a bitch' line is insulting too. Like we don't understand how life is. I'm an adult, I know how hard living a life can be. Don't apologize for it. That insinuates that there's something you could've done about it. And especially don't use it to excuse this lazy piece of writing. I've known authors who've gone a year without writing because life got in the way, and when they finally put out a new chapter, it was worth it.

    That being said, I do like how you're setting up your characters. I'd like to say something about the plot, but it hasn't gone anywhere so I can't really comment on it. I'm a bit confused about Fenrir's pack, as I don't remember him having one at the beginning of the story, but I'll go with it.

    I'd like to say that my rant wasn't to discourage you from writing, or to hate on you or your writing. I'm simply showing my displeasure at this particular chapter (chapter 14) because of how lazy it was put together, and how little it did for the story. If we're to wait that long for a chapter, I'd at least like the wait to be worth the time.
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  • From ANON - Varjo on June 30, 2013
    Well what did he expect?! If Fenrir wanted a meek little sub he should've kept to the wolves of his pack. Pepper comes in small packages, and I've always thought Harry was short tempered... Please write more when you have the chance!
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  • From ANON - Sliver on May 06, 2013
    Great story so far! Keep writing, I want to find out what's going to happen to Harry. Poor Remus! Will he go back to the pack to be with Harry? Looking forward to the next chapter!
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  • From JuliaOS13 on May 05, 2013
    I really like this story I hope you plan to continue it!!!
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  • From ANON - Memorex on March 21, 2013
    I love this story, I like how Harry is both humanly and sensibly afraid while still having a spine :) please continue can wait to see what you do with the plot and the characters.
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  • From ANON - Jennifer on January 20, 2013
    I really love this story. Please what ever you do keep writing i really do love it.
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  • From ANON - mekare on January 19, 2013
    But you're working on a new chapter? brilliant story, ktrora deserves to be finished.. new chapter soon as possible, please..
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  • From bloodshound on December 31, 2012
    oh, oh, harry sweety. more guts than brains... still, at least fen is no longer V's running dog. still, har is going to regret that one. how'd fen get round fidalis anyway?
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