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Reviews for The Truth isn't What You Think

By : ChaoticNightofFlames
  • From horsesrules on November 24, 2013
    Write more it's good
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  • From Genuka on October 10, 2013
    I eagerly look forward to the next update!
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  • From ANON - Lady Facade on March 11, 2013
    Hi,
    I really like this story and hope you continue with it. It feels heart warming when I read it and I really love your portrayal of Tom :) Keep up the excellent work!

    Lady Facade
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  • From ANON - bookivore on January 28, 2013
    I've been enjoying this story. One thing: Medical personnel are usually trained to explain what they're doing ('this is going to pinch') and ask the patient to disrobe as much as necessary ahead of time. The idea that Poppy would slide her hand under Harry's pants, without asking him to take them off or saying what she was doing, seems really wrong to me. Could he instead have a flashback about being asked to take his pants off? It seems like it would work just as well.
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  • From ANON - Lily on January 27, 2013
    Very good so far. Keep up the good job! I cant wait to read more.
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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on January 27, 2013
    Been enjoying it so far
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  • From ANON - GoddessonmyKnees on January 25, 2013
    Great chapters. I think it is sweet that he is soo comfortable with Sev.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on January 25, 2013
    glad to see more of this, and good to see harry and sev getting closer. lol a couple of spelling errors throughout ("harry's slime figure" being one of the more amusing one). keep up the good work :)
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  • From ANON - neverliveindoubt on January 24, 2013
    Congratulations on the one hundred reviews, and I cannot wait for the next chapter (beta-ed) or not.
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  • From ANON - Kyriss on January 24, 2013
    2nd line Pep-up= pepper up & acquire means to obtain or get. I believe you meant require which means needs. Also toward the end you use the the word 'desecrate' which means to foul, taint or ruin when I believe you meant 'discrete' meaning to keep information/deeds quiet or not flaunt publicly.

    This is an interesting story so far. Please keep going!
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  • From bloodshound on January 24, 2013
    i only spotted 2 typos but there may be more... I'm a craptastic speller. eh in place of ge and slime in place of slim. pretty good effort i think.
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  • From ANON - GoddessonmyKnees on January 20, 2013
    I love this story. I hope you are still writing this version.

    Can't wait for more.
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  • From DB1 on November 13, 2012
    @7. Really like this. Please update

    DB
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  • From ANON - emma elizabeth pressnell on November 09, 2012
    wow i love this story and the plot, its just brillant !!!!!
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  • From LightningStrike on November 08, 2012
    I think I read this story before, on FF. The story line is incredible! But your right, it does need some help in the way of grammar and spelling. If you'd like, I could do some beta work for you. I just started my first story, Worth A Thousand And One, and I would be honored if you'd give me any advice on it! You can contact me at marissapeasnall@yahoo.com :)
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