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Reviews for Unleashed

By : lordoberon
  • From moodysavage on September 13, 2012
    oh noooooo!!!! is more of Harry's memories gone? is he now mentally at a younger age???
    and I don't want snape giving himself to the demons either!!! arrrgggg!!!!!!!!!
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  • From CrimsonShadows on August 21, 2012
    Update soon! I love this story and want to read more!!!
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  • From jujukitty on August 20, 2012
    poor harry and his raging hormones and poor snape having his privacy invaded...not to mention his own raging hormones lmfao. so glad to see more so soon. and poor harry trying to find a way to be nice while snape is being aggressive cause of how he really feels. lupin's going to have a fun night with those two. keep up the great work, cna't wait for more :)
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  • From moodysavage on August 20, 2012
    awww... I wanted Snape to know that Harry could have been in Slytherin.
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  • From ANON - Mizukotsu on August 12, 2012
    Oh my goodness, where to even start?

    Okay, so I was not a member of this site until just now. I was often a visitor, but never felt the need for an account. After having read your story so far (which I just finished doing), I had to make an account so I could leave a review!

    This is wonderfully written, I found it extremely difficult to stop to make dinner! You mentioned that you hoped you were doing a good job with Snape, and you truly are. I can honestly say this is one of the best Snarry fics I've ever read. I can't wait for the next chapter! -wriggles- More, please! Haha.

    Once again, beautiful work. Many hugs of appreciation for you!

    Mizu
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  • From Hollibell on August 09, 2012
    Harry put everything in that pensieve. I'm so proud of him, lol. I can't remember; does Snape know about his childhood yet? Hm, could get real interesting when he "sees" all that if not. Oh and the trial! How will he get out of going to Askaban? Oh, I so look forward to the next update! Hopefully I'll be able to read it and not get behind again! ;)
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  • From Hollibell on August 09, 2012
    reviewing chp seven...

    No need to be nervous, you're doing fine. No need to rush the plot either. You may feel it's moving slowly, but things need to develop; and a rushed plot would leave readers confused. Also, there isn't really a need to announce pov changes. It's pretty clear whose mind or conscience (which ever makes sense) we're in with in your writing itself. We readers shouldn't get confused. You do a good job keeping that clear.

    I loved that scene in Severus' office. Good thing she hadn't completely interrupted him, lol. That could have been awkward. ;)
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  • From Hollibell on August 09, 2012
    I'm, well, behind. This review is for chp 6....


    I feel so bad for Snape right now! I can certainly guess what methods the demons used. As much as he wants Harry, that must have hurt like hell.
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  • From ANON - jujukittychick on August 04, 2012
    *cries about having to wait for mroe* and somehow i managed to miss chap 7 and had to go back and read it. and oh my, *fans self* nice to see sev finally give in to those urges of his even if only by himself. and harry's little moment of freedom with the broom and wand were cute. hopefully those two can learn to bend a little when it comes to dealing with the other. keep up the great work :)
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  • From SoulMore on August 03, 2012
    FAN!~
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  • From ANON - jujukittychick on August 03, 2012
    poor guys, both stubborn and strong willed and aggravated with their position in life and having to find a way to coexist with each other. wonder work, keep it up :)
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  • From HeartStar on August 03, 2012
    oh more please so did ff.net delete your stories? I tried to find youon there but there are no stories... let me know thanks
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  • From Secretness on August 02, 2012
    I really like how you are true to Snape and his past. I love a good fanfiction, but most bore me. This one, though, I look for a couple times a day. I like the detail and the gradual progression in Harry's and Snape's changing attitudes. Please don't adandon it.
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  • From jujukitty on August 02, 2012
    yay for more! and harry finally got to find out one of snape's bigger secrets. and yeah, poor snape deff deserves a drink after all that. keep up the good work :)
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  • From Hollibell on July 30, 2012
    Oh, man! What a way to leave it! I am really enjoying this story. I look forward to the next chapter!
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