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Reviews for Draken Blood

By : Morbid_and_Sexy
  • From odysseystar1996 on February 22, 2020

    love this story all ready can't wait to finish it


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  • From Kittykat575 on December 15, 2015
    Awesome!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Mariah on October 25, 2015
    I like the fresh take on the drackens theme. Other then I feel that you could go into some more detail, I think it's wonderful. Great choices but would like to know more about your original characters. I like the family history for 'Maria'. Kudos, and can't wait til your next update.
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  • From daisy.tya on February 28, 2014
    :) Hi! good story , i see resemblance with the story of star but see difference to so is good.

    I was thinking if Harry can go to see the chef Goblin at Gringotts wit what Ron as write of Dumby paie him wit the money of Harry and ask for reprisal from them 2 ?
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  • From horsesrules on November 22, 2013
    Write more it's really good
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  • From ANON - Chrys on July 02, 2013
    I was actually looking forward to reading this story. Im totally in love with Rise of the Drakens, and figured this would be interesting; ya know a total twist or maybe even a totally new plot. I was really disappointed. Understanding that you have permission from Starlight, I was still hoping for some orginality. There is some in the number of mates, who said mates are and the evil Dumbledork/Ronnikins ( which i LOVE to read.. after all how can Dumbles expect.. err wait not gonna rant);but in the end, it still has a taste of Starlight's Rise of the Drakens as in so far as the plot that I can see. Many of the scenes are a bit more rushed in wording, but they seem to me, her scenes in your words.

    This isnt a flame, just a statement of fact as I see them. I may not know what Star was thinking, but I would assume ( and as a writer myself I feel this way) that she felt you would take her idea ( or I should say the orginal owner of drakens idea anyway) and twist and turn and all the other good ( or bad ^_^) things one can write and make it your own.. not take her story chew on it and spit it out and call it your own.. Orginality after all is a beautiful.. twisted.. wonderful thing to behold.. and so damn interesting to read!

    Anyway good luck with your story.

    Ja ne,
    Chrys
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  • From Wicked-Lovely-17 on March 26, 2013
    I like it. ;)
    It is a very good story line, I do wish there was more detail and definition to the story. (I admit I am picky about what I read and normally give up if it doesnt draw me into the world of it completely, BUT i really like the story idea so im gonna keep reading! :D

    Update soon please :D
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  • From Fallen13Angel7 on March 10, 2013
    I am sorry that you are not feeling well. I hope that you feel better soon, and the story is amazing so far.I am excited to read t next chapter.
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  • From ANON - mizzwhip72 on February 02, 2013
    I wouldn't stay at that school for nothing.
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on January 29, 2013
    seem rush
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  • From ANON - dominique1 on January 29, 2013
    seems good so far
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  • From ANON - Sillysnarrylovinggirl on January 19, 2013
    First off, the first words out of Malfoy's mouth should've been 'piss off potter' or something like that, but then again I'm not sure in this story how he feels post Voldemort or how much I'm supposed to guess his attitude from the other story. Why is Hermione a giant? I'm confused. And it kinda seems like Harry went off on dumbles for no reason-- yes he has done stuff but you know, establish the character -- don't make me guess or assume everything--- it's harder for me being in the nice dumbles camp myself.
    All that said, this is just my honest first chapter reaction-- I plan to read more and see if anything makes more since later. I'm also interested in how the mating happens in a non cooperative dumbles environment.
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  • From PeriLover on January 19, 2013
    I like where you are going with this. I'm sorry about your family problems, I know what that is like. I can't wait for your next chapter. I also am reading Rise of the Drakens, but I like the differences you have put into your story. Keep up the good work!
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  • From ANON - Diana on January 12, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From Sullen-Faythe on January 11, 2013
    I like this story not as good as the other one but thqlats simply because you kind of move the story around to fast so we don't get the time to fall in love with your characters like we did in rise of the drakens. If you slowed down your writing style and didn't rush through the character development this story would be made all the better. I love your hermionie she fits almost perfectly in a dom role. :)
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