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Reviews for Corvus

By : LadyFreak
  • From demonsangel on February 10, 2013
    Post more, post more! lol Great chapters, I absolutely love reading this. A lot of what you write resonates strongly with me and follows a lot of me own ideas on magic, which makes it all the better to read and that much more believable. I really can't wait to read more. There were a couple things I wanted to note quickly

    1. "He watched on warily as the boy placed the snake on his shoulders before c" This sentence was incomplete.

    2. "When the light faded, both professors blinked slowly to find the on his knees in the center of the circle alone" This one is missing a word I think.

    Anyways, great job!
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  • From ANON - heartstar on February 10, 2013
    Thank you fo rthe added words I loved the update and look forward to more when you can thank you.
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  • From ANON - 917brat on February 10, 2013
    wow just wow this is sooo brillint and I really can't wait to see how second year turns out please keep it up....oh and the ravenclaw magic have began to accept him right well what about the other one has it started yet?
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  • From Jan on February 03, 2013
    Yup! ^_^ Though, don't like that Albus is getting really close to the truth of Corvus identity. Please update chapter 31 soon.
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  • From demonsangel on January 31, 2013
    *squeals* Two chapters! So happy right now ^^ Great job hun, loved them both. There is one thing of note, in the 29th chapter you used the name Harry instead of Corvus when Cor was going to explain what happened in the chamber and Dumbles tried to stop him. Other then that, looks good! I can't wait to read more. The fact that you have so many chapters written is just..torture XD I can't wait to read more! I love the twists you are putting on this.
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  • From stray523 on January 28, 2013
    Great story so far! I just found it yesterday and have already read up to the current chapter. I can't wait to see more!
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  • From Jan on January 28, 2013
    Why must they save the idiot duo? Why not let them, and the wizarding world know what useless beings they are? ..... Well I guess that would kill most of the story line, won't it?

    Oh well, please update chapter 29 soon.
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  • From moodysavage on January 25, 2013
    Rita Skeeter!!! I might actually like you!!! That article that was actually all facts and totally slanted to show how bad Dumbledore and Potter are being... you did good!
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  • From ANON - Sapphire Phoenix on January 24, 2013
    I always anxiously await updates to this story, so please go on! I did find some errors in one place-

    Corvus snorted into his tea. At Mandy's look, he read the article out loud. "The publicly announced that they knew their son was bullying others. Listen to this: 'We had no idea the bullying had gone that far'. Their either too stupid to hire a publicist or the one they have is a moron."

    It probably should be "They publicly announced" and the proper use of 'Their' should be "They're" since you are contracting they are.
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  • From ANON - mithrilandtj on January 24, 2013
    I love this story! And I just found it today!
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  • From demonsangel on January 23, 2013
    *sighs* Why must you tease me so? Stopping at such a place is just...cruel! Great chapter though, I loved how he is starting to have visions and is working to piece them together. The Potters really aren't that bright are they. So, I had a question. Was Charlie bullying others as well? I ask because of the other students who seemed to appreciate the articles. Can't wait to read more hun!
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  • From FaeChild on January 18, 2013
    Hey, loving the story so far, can't wait for more. I just wanted to point out that you had Corvus say 'aunt Cissa' I think you meant for him to say 'mum.'
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  • From Jan on January 17, 2013
    Interesting instincts Harry got there, please update chapter 28 soon ^_^
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  • From moodysavage on January 16, 2013
    7 chapters ahead?!? ok... it's a holiday on Monday... if you upload all of them on Friday then I can read all of them over the weekend... yeah... sounds great... right? right? you're so not going to do that are you?

    sigh... ok... I'll wait if I must.
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  • From Kayrox133 on January 16, 2013
    Now that was brilliant! No Quidditch until the end of third year? Lol
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