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Reviews for Why Salazar Left

By : Eskimita
  • From ANON - SRM on November 02, 2012
    I love it please update
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  • From ANON - Cassie on November 02, 2012
    Can not wait for more of this story
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  • From disgruntledfairy on October 24, 2012
    Your dedication to writing is amazing; a whole chapter written on your phone is some mad skills. Loved the new chapter and I can't wait to see what's going to happen now that Hermione knows who Harry became in the past. Anyways thanks for another chapter!
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  • From ANON - Bobette13 on October 22, 2012
    ... You wrote that on a freakin' phone keyboard? Egads. I admire your dedication, I never would have guessed - no glaring spelling/grammar issues or anything, and a decent length (although, y'know, longer chapters are always awesome).

    Hope you get your keyboard fixed (or find a different keyboard) soon!


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  • From savannah19742001 on October 22, 2012
    Wow, just started this story and all I have to say is brilliant. And I am so glad you are doing an mpreg for Harry. It should be very interesting when Harry comes back with a spouse. I do hope Harry realizes how everyone really is in his own time.
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  • From ANON - vinfairie on October 22, 2012
    You typed this last chapter from your phone??? That is serious dedication :) Thanks for the update, love the story.
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  • From cullenandpotterlover on October 22, 2012
    Thank you for such a wonderful story. I wish that I was this creative. I hope that you continue to write many stories that are just as great as this one.
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  • From MaytiaTheSorceress on October 18, 2012
    I love your story I can't wait to see where you go from here.....I mean this is the first harry/salazar I have ever read and your story makes me want to read more.....PLEASE UPDATE SOON!!!!!!
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  • From disgruntledfairy on October 14, 2012
    I love it! Your story is amazing. I can't wait to read more. Thanks for writing!
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  • From ANON - Cham on October 13, 2012
    One of the most interesting plots I have read in a long time. I am thoroughly enjoying this! Please continue one with it!

    Thank you
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  • From twilitdragoneye on October 13, 2012
    Ok first I think you are doing a really great job with this story so kudos! I love how the characters interact with each other, it's believable and really excellent.

    (Warning of rant) Unfortunately You just confirmed an annoyance for me in this newest chapter. Back in Chapter three you called it All Hallows Eve which is a CHRISTIAN tradition. It was the feast for the day before All Hallows or All saints day. Your talk of druids therefore contradicts whether or not the founders would have any idea what Harry is talking about as a date. That and as I am studying Druid lore and traditions I find the absolute need to beg you to change your incorrect information. Druids did not celebrate All Hallows Eve, they celebrated Samhain, as their end of year before the rest period (new year begins in February). Also you have dated the founders time to being in 990. All Hallows eve was not even a term until the mid 1500's. Please, this wouldn't be so much of an issue except that you are presenting misinformation as facts at the bottom of your chapters. Please correct it, complete further research, double check, just please. Especially if you try to include any more "druid" traditions. (end rant/begging session)

    Otherwise you are doing a good job. Can't wait to read next chapter.
    ~Pen
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  • From historylife on October 13, 2012
    awesome
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  • From teriwright on October 12, 2012
    i'm enjoying this story as it hits many of my likes: founders, time travel, harry finding love, dumbles getting his comeuppance, etc. Will harry be healed of his past injuries? after the scan, wouldn't the founders (anyone really) insist on some medical attention?
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  • From Aline on October 12, 2012
    Interesting story, I'm really liking it. The changes in the future are a nice touch. I like the relationship building between Harry and Salazar.
    Though you have to change the disclaimer before the archive manager sends you a notification. The disclaimer must say that the characters and Harry Potter in general are not of your own creation and that you
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  • From Green_eyed_lover on October 11, 2012
    I'm not one for time travel stories because its been over done, however putting the twist with the founders peaks my interest and I'm glad I started to read this as I love it. Love the fact that you have put the effort into making certain parts reflect the time frame. Also for this chapter I laughed because Princess Bride is one of my favourite movies so I was tickled pink when I read that subtle reference. Also please do mpreg, I absolutely love when Harry is pregnant, he's cute and funny
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