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Reviews for Harry and his Brainy Girls

By : sheltiedg
  • From ANON - NavyMan on November 02, 2013
    A couple of ideas I have for your Brainy Girl's series

    1) Narcissa and/or other pureblood milfs is/gets knocked up by Harry

    2) Harry and a girl or girls role play i.e. Chap. 9



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  • From ANON - ^_^ moar please on October 10, 2013
    Can we get more Harry/Astoria? Perhaps a scenario where Draco is taken into custody, charged with the crime of [insert plot device] and Harry stays behind to get a statement from Astoria Malfoy. (Narcissa can also be present which would make for a nice three-way). Astoria is understandably upset for whichever reason and wants to know what will happen to her husband and if there's anything she can do.

    Lead-in to Harry seducing Astoria and then revealing that she isn't the only Lady Malfoy that has been cheating on her husband which cues Narcissa to enter.
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  • From ANON - Lichblade on September 13, 2013
    An excellent set of stories, but there is one thing that annoys me:

    Wither vs writhe

    Wither means to dry up or shrivel
    Writhe means to twist or squirm

    I know what you're trying to convey, but i can't help but picture the girl of the day shriveling up and turning to dust as Harry teases her...
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  • From dault3883 on September 09, 2013
    could you do some more Harry/Tonks, harry/Susan Bones, and some more Harry/Lily Evans Potter(his mom) ones please?
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  • From ANON - Bryan on September 08, 2013
    Been enjoying all of your Lead Male + Any and Every attractive female series. I noticed you were interested in idea's and thought I'd make a couple of general suggestions to help. Firstly I understand that the stories are written as a series of unconnected single chapters but I also think you might like to consider making some more linked chapters, These chapters could be direct sequels possibly featuring same characters or different encounters in a small timeframe. Or they could be Linked chapters possibly all sharing some common/linkage concept... Birthdays, Quidditch, etc...

    You might also consider making a mini-series with each chapter embodying a concept of a larger whole. [Deadly Sins, Heavenly Virtues, Starsigns, Classical Elements, etc...]

    My final idea is that you might consider exploring more ideas and quirks of the characters in relation to their Bedroom activities... I am of course alluding to Fetishes. Their are a large number of these and while most are probably a bit far out there compared to what you or your average reader might want to read even looking at ways to bring new things into the encounters might give you new idea's. (Light Bondage or Sex Aids are easily usable as a focus of a scene or as a minor addition)
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  • From Pennyiswise on September 06, 2013
    Awesome chapter. Clueless gay Malfoy lol.
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  • From ANON - JimGo on September 06, 2013
    I saw in the archive of our own that you've started writing different pairings than your usual ones...

    Might I request a Harry/Molly one or maybe a Harry/Minerva or Harry/Poppy one?

    Just thought you might be open to it...
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  • From ANON - M on August 29, 2013
    I've been enjoying this series. Any chance you'd consider writing a Hermione-centric version?
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  • From Pennyiswise on July 05, 2013
    awesome story.
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  • From ANON - emily on June 17, 2013
    Maybe you can put his future daughters in as pairings?

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  • From Pennyiswise on June 14, 2013
    Awesome chapter. Good old Luna.
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  • From Argo0 on May 24, 2013
    love this story. such a variety of women, which is what i like when it comes to smut. Would like to see more incest stories as well. Maybe a threesome between his mother and sister? Also would like to see a chapter with Harry and his daughter.

    Keep up the good work and look forward to more
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  • From Pennyiswise on May 24, 2013
    Nice to see new girls added.
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  • From Pennyiswise on May 24, 2013
    Awesome story. Always fun to get one over Malfoy lol
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  • From ANON - Jerri on May 14, 2013
    Could you write a couple of M rated stories consisting of the pairings of Su Li and Lisa Turpin, along with Narcissa Malfoy and Bellatrix LeStrange?
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