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Reviews for Voice of Reason

By : Ace1984
  • From TexasTurtle on June 16, 2020

    Thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful stories.


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  • From OmniViceUser on January 10, 2020

    Greetings Mr. Ace, i have just finished reading this Story, after having the shorter pleasure of reading "Grey is Better" & "Complicated Life" from you, and i´d like to say: please, return to these Stories and finish them. I understand that it can be tasking to continue something you last visited nearly 7 Years ago, but i plead you. All 3 of these Stories are to good to be left unfinished


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  • From ANON - Melissa on November 14, 2015
    Best book ever!!!!! I love it. I wonder what Ginny is up to.... Please update thank u.

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  • From ANON - midnightlioness on January 06, 2014
    This I a good story . When is more being put up
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  • From doubledamn on October 09, 2013
    The 'fading' thing reminds me of what happens to your Creature in black & White (PC) if it takes too much damage or is too hungry.

    Great chapter, keep it up.
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  • From doubledamn on October 09, 2013
    Hey Kevin, great story (as always, seriously the only problem you have is writing too many stories at the same time, makes updating a bit of a hassle.)

    Anyway, fantastic work on the whole story so far, just a suggestion though, in the last chapter Sharptooth decided to help bring the person responsible to 'Justice'. I would change that to 'Goblin Justice' i think it would far less lenient than what the Wizarding World would do, especially considering the results of the last War.
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  • From ANON - Nathoca Malfoy on July 08, 2013
    I prefer this version.
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  • From ANON - Luna/Wind on July 07, 2013
    Hi. Just want to say that I love the story, and look forward to future chapters. I left you a message on FF about editing, and I again say the same thing here. Thanks for writing.

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  • From ANON - drizma on February 15, 2013
    hey "ace" i iz back
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  • From ANON - Demented Hunter on December 25, 2012
    I cannot remember my own email at the moment so I could not fill that in. The reason I have chosen to review this story is because you have a very interesting plot that I am really looking forward to reading more of. I also wanted to suggest that you consider asking someone to beta-read your work for grammer errors. This story does contain a lot of them, though most of them are adding 's to certain words. I really hope you have a Happy Holiday and that you're able to update this this very interesting story again soon
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  • From demonsangel on December 24, 2012
    Well, I wasn't going to review until later after I got some sleep as I can barely see at the moment, but after seeing this story has only recieved 3 reviews, I just couldn't walk off and do it later.

    First off, I like this story. I normally get bored with "all powerful harry haram-ish" stories but this has some nice twists. Such as Dumbles having a horcrux, something I have never seen before, the removal of limbs to get rid of the dark mark, something I have only seen Rowling do, and Minerva as a god mother as well as many other things.

    Second, bravo on getting so many chapters. I hope there are many more to come and look forward to reading it. I do have one thing I would like to point out. The one mistake I see being made over and over in each chapter is the use of "as." A lot of the time, you use "as" instead of "has." I can see this being done to point out someone's accent, like the french school, but you do it even in normal explanation which causes confusion and disrupts the flow of the story because the sentence no longer makes sense. If this could be changed, it would be very much appreciated.

    Looking forward to reading more, keep it up!
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  • From sheltiedg on December 24, 2012
    As I read this all I think you changed a few thing since I don't remember this happening in chapter 18 when I read it before. I might be wrong. Don't get me wrong I have no problem with it. I am just trying to figure it all out.
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  • From ladilyndi on December 23, 2012
    Nice twist on an old theme. I look forward to seeing what you do with this. Good writing, it kept me interested and I wanted to read more. Thanks.
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  • From ANON - Kain on December 23, 2012
    hmm, very interesting start. I am quite interested in seeing where the plot goes and how this fresh pairing will work out.
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