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Reviews for Lost Phoenix

By : sshp4ever
  • From TheReapersDaughter on July 21, 2016

    is this story finished? will it be finished?


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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 24, 2013
    Re read a couple chapters and read the rest. One of the most different stories I've read. I hope you are goingto finish this. Poor Harry!! I want to see him rescued by Severus sooo much! I've always thought Dumbledore was a coward and a manipulator. He got what he deserved.
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  • From ANON - whitebuffalowmn on June 14, 2013
    wow what a great story! I'd like to see more of it, please. The battle was unbelieveable. {Please more of Harry, even if he doesn't remember who he is
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on May 08, 2013
    This is so OC it's fascinating! Hope he finds Harry next chapter. I think you killed some of the people I liked the most or loved to hate the most. And Dumbledore...don't get me started on him! Good job Severus!!
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 26, 2013
    OMG! Poor Harry!!! Lucius too? When is Severus going to save him? That miserable clown, that self indulgent, self righteous, pompous creep Dumbledore! Please save Harry & find him a loving person (hopefully Severus who I most of the time love). Never mind Harry, I don't know if I can stand any more!
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  • From ANON - Bec on April 26, 2013
    Please update! waiting to see what will happen
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 12, 2013
    Sad, more sad, each chapter sadder yet!!! Please can we get him some help and/or revenge soon? I don't see how he is still living but he needs someone to show him he is worth everything to someone. Someone to cuddle him, love him, tell him he is needed & wanted.
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  • From AFFModerator on April 05, 2013

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  • From FairyBean on April 05, 2013
    This is a new take that I havent seen before (although i did read a story where Vernon killed Hedwig by fire)

    hope he gets saved soon :) Loving this. Do you do an update mailing list? or some sort of timeline of updates? (if not no worries, ill just randomly check back every so often)

    Keep up the awesome writing
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  • From ANON - jxadams on April 03, 2013
    Rather violent start to what may be an interesting story. Very disturbing the violence inflicted upon Harry. Will the food provided be able to sustain him enough that he can heal? Or are you relying on his magic to keep his alive? Looking forward to reading more of your story.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 03, 2013
    Please get Snape over to the Dursleys soon. I can't tell you how sad Harry's situation makes me feel. He desparately needs someone to care for him and Snape has had a horrible life and needs love also. They would be so perfect for each other and would understand each other better than anyone else.
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  • From BAFan on April 03, 2013
    Well, you almost lost me as a reader when Hedwig was killed, 'cause that always makes me crazy, but I believe I'll continue on awhile longer. Wait and see what develops.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 02, 2013
    Ohhh Harry! When is Severus going to come rescue him? I hope he punishes the Dursleys & Albus for putting him there & keeping him there.
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  • From ANON - ajablue on March 30, 2013
    Such a sad beginning. I'm interested to see where this goes next, though I do hate when Hedwig gets killed off because I have such a close bond with my own pets.
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  • From magentah on March 28, 2013
    I thought your warnings were perfectly adequate. I really like the first chapter! Heartbreaking to lose Hedwig and Harry's things (the cloak! family photos! wand! eek). I hope Harry can weather the storm, so to speak; looks like it's shaping up to be a good story. :) Thanks for sharing it!
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