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Reviews for Unwanted Bonds

By : CelticKitsune
  • From ANON - Japhia on November 28, 2013
    I am genuinely happy for Harry! :D It's so nice to see him smile.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 28, 2013
    I thought you had given up on this story. I'm very happy you haven't and I look forward to reading more in the future.
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  • From Arithmancer on November 28, 2013
    Draco doing the right thing, finally, is always positive! Maybe they can get Narcissa out at New Year
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  • From ANON - jujukitty on November 27, 2013
    wow, really enjoying this story, as much as i want to shake draco for being a stubborn, obnoxious brat lol. can't wait to see what happens with the boys when they finally start hearing the truth of things from harry. though i'm kinda curious as to why snape isn't picking up on some of the things harry's been seeing more, but then you've pretty much set him up as just being an asshole to everyone no matter what lol. keep up the great work, i'm really looking forward to seeing what happens next :D
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  • From jami_lee on October 07, 2013
    all right draco!!!
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  • From NAnderson on October 06, 2013
    Ohh I feel like such a loser right now. I read that last line and yelled out "Duh duh daaaa!" lol. The story just keep getting more and more interesting. Cant wait for the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Pete on October 02, 2013
    Great story, I'll help you beta it if you like. Take care, Pete
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  • From ANON - Sue on October 01, 2013
    You've got a good start to what looks like a promising story. I do have one suggestion to make things easier on your readers though. You may want to consider breaking up some of those page-long paragraphs. There should be only one subject in each. Readers tend to 'get lost' or 'skim through' unusually large paragraphs.

    Compare it to listening to someone who rambles on without pausing to take a breath. After a while, listening to them becomes tiring, and your attention starts to wander.
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  • From jami_lee on October 01, 2013
    Oh No!!! Poor Harry!!
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  • From magentah on September 30, 2013
    Cliffhanger! God, I hope Draco does the right thing. I hope he lets Blaise push him to do the right thing. Dumbledore may manipulate, but at least he doesn't physically torture (just, you know, emotionally!). Really looking forward to the next update!
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  • From Jan on September 25, 2013
    Loving it, this is truly a great story, hope to see chapter 10 soon ^_^
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  • From BAFan on September 19, 2013
    Ch. 1

    Oh dear. I can just see Harry sinking into a major depression and self-loathing. Hope his bondmates can help him with that.

    "'Look, Harry. We just don't think you and Ron should be fighting right now. Ron is really stubborn and knowing him he'll say things that will just make you upset with him,' Fred tried to explain, but the slightly blank look Harry gave him and George and the small nod before Harry pulled his arm free from Blaise and ran back up towards the castle."

    Uh, that last really isn't a complete sentence, as is. I think maybe this is what you meant: "...Fred tried to explain, but the slightly blank look Harry gave him and George and the small nod before Harry pulled his arm free from Blaise and ran back up towards the castle stopped him in mid-attempt."

    That's a bit cumbersome but something along those lines. Onto the next chapter!
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  • From jami_lee on September 09, 2013
    Love the story!! Can't wait to read more!!
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  • From NAnderson on September 01, 2013
    Another wonderfully written chapter ^.^ I loved that ending bit, where Draco grew a bit of a protective bone :) And I'm looking forward to more
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  • From moodysavage on September 01, 2013
    I like this! And I hope Draco feels horrible when he finds out how sending his emotions to Harry has effected him.
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