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Reviews for Flashpoint

By : KusanoSaku
  • From ANON - Witchwithfangs on March 01, 2015
    Alrighty then lass, I'll grant you an O for the overall story and an E for this chapter. I deducted marks because while you gave us names of the design and colors you left much of the detail out. If you are going to name something, in my opinion you need to have a mental picture of it in your mind and as such I want to be able to draw your mental picture into my own mind from your description. Still most of your chapters are O quality, so smile! See you at the next chapter.
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on June 05, 2014
    wait, wasn't teddy like several years older then scorpius in the books? I mean teddy was born when Draco was 17 so ...he would have had to have gotten a girl pregnant during the 7th year...
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  • From Jan on August 16, 2013
    Please update chapter 8 soon ^_^
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  • From Jan on July 08, 2013
    Absolutely love this story, can't wait and see what Teddy tells Scorpius once he finds him, please update chapter 7 soon ^_^
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