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Reviews for Inheriting One\'s Enemy

By : SlyPhenix
  • From OmniViceUser on January 08, 2020

    A interesting Idea for a HP Story, unfortinutly a bit plagued by Typos, and also unfinished. Shame really


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  • From ANON - a friend on November 25, 2013
    But do not take the criticism as anything other then constructive! I Enjoyed the story and you should continue writing just check or over a bit more before posting or get someone else to beta read it for you so that they can spot the mistakes a single set of eyes sometimes miss.

    Good luck with the story!
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  • From ANON - a friend on November 25, 2013
    You might want to look into the correct use of the word "thou" you seem to be using it as if it was "though" and not as an archaic word meaning basically "you", "your","thy" or "thine". For example take the commandment: Thou shalt not kill.
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  • From ANON - Spaces on October 13, 2013
    You need more of them between paragraphs and less in the dialogue
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 13, 2013
    so...many...typos!
    the idea is good but the sheer amount of typos and misused words makes it painful to read. please, please work on that.
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