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By : scarletladyy
  • From RykOakwine on October 05, 2015
    The premise, that of a widowed Narcissa becoming the lover of a deranged Bellatrix during the war where Harry has not defeated Voldemort yet, has potential.

    Narcissa's objections to Bellatrix's initial seduction were weak as there were no objections based on anything other than a vague sense of Western religious values. No protest based on anything specific to their culture at all.

    Three years pass for nono reason that we can tell. Then someone dies, arbitrarily.

    Technical writing is not very good. Lots of typos, errors in the import the author hasn't bothered to fix.

    Disappointing
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  • From AFFModerator on October 02, 2013

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  • From AFFModerator on September 25, 2013

    Please correct your disclaimer.


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