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Reviews for The Wages of Going On

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From BAFan on October 27, 2013
    Ch. 4

    "Harry closed his eyes and took a deep breath. He was more upset than he should be by this. Malfoy and Snape might want to meet, but that was no reason that Harry ever had to see them again. And he wouldn
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on October 23, 2013
    No, I suspected that Severus' direct approach would the last thing Harry wanted right now, for no matter how much he tries to push it aside, he's suffering from what happened to him, and the last two people he wants to see are Draco and Severus. Unfortunately, I have the feeling that those are the two people he's going to have to see in order to survive fully, and to move on with his life.
    I love the way that you describe their presences in each others' minds. How Snape is bitterness to Draco, and Draco is guilt to Snape, and over all of that Harry is a weight bearing down against them both. It sounds so apropos for them to be like that, considering the terrible circumstances in which their bond was made. I'm glad that Harry is going to share what happened with Ron and Hermione, and while I can guess what their reactions are going to be like, I sincerely hope that Hermione's intelligence will go to work and convince him that he does need to see the other two to work on this bond. I think that will be essential for all of their survivals.
    Thanks for another great chapter.
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  • From Genuka on October 22, 2013
    You're evil because of how well you're weaving the story.
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  • From WorldePARALLEL on October 17, 2013
    I didn't realize that there is already a new story being written... I must have been out of touch for some while, with all the assignments and presentations and stuff :(

    An intriguing start to the story, I must say. Although, well, it was a seriously intense scene... But I like the flow of thought, so rare it is for Harry to be able to be in control of his thoughts rather than Snape and Malfoy (I know, I know, I'm deliberately ignoring the effects of the ritual on them, but I really didn't like their idea of breaking and conquering him - I thought they should have already moved past this stage), and for him to actually retain his control and mask in front of others; his training must really have paid off. They seriously can't blame him for being kidnapped, can they? It isn't as if he is some ultimate hero without any flaws, he's just as human as anyone else (poor poor Harry, why do you always have the hero expectation when you become an auror?)...

    Even if Snape and Malfoy decides to help him in the investigation and revenge on the Lestranges, I don't really think that Harry would like the idea of being close to them, or working with them... Since his experience is recent and I think that he is still hurting very much from it, no matter how hard he tries to ignore the feelings - it won't go away! Oh and by the way, Harry seems to feel and understand Snape's and Malfoy's thoughts and feelings much clearer than they do him, why is it so? Did his bargain affect the nature or direction of the bond?

    I really look forward to your next update!
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on October 13, 2013
    It is very interesting to see all three men trying to work through the problems that they have in the aftermath of what happened. Severus is confronting it head on, dealing with it as he's learned to deal with all of his problems, in the most direct manner possible. Draco can only benefit from being with Severus at this time, though, I have to say...Severus' very direct speech to Malfoy about who and what he is was a good wake up call for Draco. Harry, on the other hand, seems to be concentrating on the positive and pushing aside the negative. I think that might only get him so far.
    You've started your story off with a 'bang'. (No pun or naughty thought intended.) And now you're developing it into a more thoughtful and expressive story that is demanding my attention. I can't wait to see what happens between these three men and how they work through this problem that they all share.
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  • From BAFan on October 13, 2013
    Ch. 3

    Great chapter! Though I don't understand why the Healer couldn't have done her diagnistics and healing before talking to Harry. Wouldn't he be able to concentrate better if he weren't in pain? And it seems that Kingsley had good reason to look embarrassed, based on what we've seen so far of his Aurors' competence - or lack thereof.

    Should be some interesting dynamics ahead between Harry, Draco, and Severus!
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  • From Genuka on October 13, 2013
    *stares* You're evil. More please!
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on October 09, 2013
    Wow, so very difficult for all of them, now that they have their senses back. Harry made a very informed decision, and stuck to it, and in the end he was able to accomplish what he'd set out to do, but now they have to deal with the aftermath, and it will be very interesting to see just how all three of these different men come to terms with what happened.
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  • From BAFan on October 09, 2013
    Ch. 2

    *Shudder* This was really hard to read. The content, I mean. I don't remember a true rape scene like that in any of your other fics, but then with 260-something (?) stories in your repertoire it isn't surprising that I can't recall every detail. :-) This chapter was very intense and powerful, and Harry showed immense fortitude, not to mention concentration, but I wonder if it won't come back to bite him in some way. I sincerely hope that Kingsley forces him to get medical attention, because I can just see Harry downplaying his injuries and trying to deal with them on his own. Maybe Severus will be the one to insist on it?

    I had to chuckle - you know, the dark kind - at Severus's comment that there wasn't a code of conduct to cover their situation. Yeah, no. And have to wonder how the safehouse was compromised. Is there a traitor in the Aurors? Grim times ahead, methinks.
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  • From ANON - kit on October 08, 2013
    really interesting story! I am usually not a fan of threesomes, but your stories are always so great that I had to give it a chance. I like Harry's character. He seems very rational and calm, but there is something dark underneath. I'm interested in reading how this situation is handled. They were able to get out of the ritual circle, but I dont think the bond between all three of them is so easily resolved.
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  • From ANON - A on October 05, 2013
    Update soon!
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  • From BAFan on October 05, 2013
    Ch. 1

    ANOTHER new story? When do you sleep??? :-D This one looks quite exciting, as usual, and as usual I'll be eagerly anticipating the next update!
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  • From ANON - ChelseaPlume on October 05, 2013
    Wow, you've worked really hard at making what could just be PWP into a viable and interesting story. Having set this all up you've actually made me very interested just how Harry is going to make this turn out all right. I'm very intrigued to see what you've thought of for the next chapter, even though I don't normally go for Harry and Draco in any combination. Good job so far.
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