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Reviews for Picking Up the Pieces

By : greenwizard11
  • From ANON - Wulan on June 19, 2015
    Email me next time you update..
    I really love this story...
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  • From ANON - Mila Pink on August 02, 2014
    I'm dying to read more chapters.
    Already loving the story.
    Kisses
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  • From ANON - TinkerBabe7 on April 16, 2014
    ^_-

    Wow... That sure didn't take long for Harry to pretty much get over all the happened. Personally this feels as if James cares more about Severus than he does Harry. While this may not be true it sure as heck seems like it. Does James even want to spend time with Harry, just Harry, and get to know him? Try to get to know the son he was never there for? I'm glad that the two are reunited and its wonderful but damn. This just, idk.
    It's not a horrible story- I do like bits of it, I just think that it'd take more than just James telling Harry what he wants.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on April 15, 2014
    Chapters 1-5: This is a strange story! Got to see where this goes for awhile anyway.
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  • From ANON - minieegold on February 18, 2014
    Thank you!! I love this couple and your story ^^
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  • From horsesrules on February 08, 2014
    write more its really good
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  • From BAFan on January 31, 2014
    Ch. 1-4

    Very interesting premise. The main thing that strikes me is that James isn't acting in a very paternal manner. Instead of trying to help Harry get through his shock and grief over Dumbledore's death and his return from the dead, he basically abandons him in the infirmary to go with Snape. To be fair, everyone else left the infirmary too, but he doesn't seem to be showing much concern for his son.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on November 01, 2013
    Wonderful!
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on October 19, 2013
    pretty sure James has brown eyes not blue.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on October 18, 2013
    Okay.
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  • From jami_lee on October 10, 2013
    wow!!! can't wait to read more!!!
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  • From ANON - Marky802 on October 08, 2013
    I am intrigued can't wait for more! :)

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