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Reviews for Make it a Triple, Barkeep

By : lovetoseverus
  • From ANON - Morganlefay1958 on February 25, 2014
    Loved this!!
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  • From BAFan on October 11, 2013
    Absolutely wonderful! I loved the way Severus reassured Harry that he was the one he'd chosen to be with; that was a lovely scene.

    I do have one possible correction: "Her smile was a bit more solicitous than Harry was used to seeing and it caught him off guard. He'd not had a lot of reasons to consider her sexual side before, and certainly wasn't used to seeing it directed at him."

    I think perhaps you mean salacious (lustful, lecherous), not solicitous (concerned)? Anyway, I thoroughly enjoyed reading this!
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  • From djaddict on October 10, 2013
    Normally, I would give a story like this a pass but I am really glad that I did not this time.

    This was a very well written and enjoyable story. It was realistuc and believable with good characterization.

    Thank you for sharing!
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  • From ladilyndi on October 09, 2013
    I thoroughly enjoyed this story. It was written with great sensitivity. Great job.
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