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Reviews for Contract Under Love

By : CelticKitsune
  • From rigger42 on January 05, 2015
    Is it too much to hope that either Harry or Draco realizes that he is being dosed with potions? I can't imagine that Draco wants Harry to be influenced that way rather than learning to work together.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 25, 2014
    chapters 1-3: So good. A little different plot or same sort of idea handled a bit uniquely. Really looking forward to the rest of the story. Like Draco being himself yet like a grown up self and Narcissa being a nice person also. They are sort of like Malfoy Normal or Malfoy At Ease while Lucius is Malfoy Intense or Malfoy Royal.
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  • From BAFan on July 28, 2014
    Ch. 1&2

    A good start; it definitely captured my interest. I don't believe I've ever run across quite this premise before. I noticed a few errors:

    ". . . Hermione had offered to come over and see him off too, but Harry had written back, telling her not to; he didn't think he could have bared to see her worried face. . . ." Should be "could have borne...."

    ". . . Harry could see they lead out of the house, into what he could only assume was the Manor ground and gardens." Should be "led."

    ". . .We will start this out slow, with you and Mr. Potter being seen in public as friends; in a few months, when your closeness has become accepted, you two will be seen as more then friends. . . ." More *than* friends.

    Eager to read the next update.


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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on July 21, 2014
    Chapters 1-2: Terrific start. Sounds very interesting. It does make me wonder what Lucius will do now that the story is starting to leak out about the boys or rather ythe young men.
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  • From ANON - Kafica on July 21, 2014
    Can't wait for more, Lucius' reaction to Draco's plan should prove to be interesting and let's not forget how old Dumble's is going to take it seeing how he want's to still control Harry's life as well. Hope more comes soon.

    Kafica
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  • From ANON - Kat on December 02, 2013
    Another chapter please. :)
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  • From ANON - hotflower901 on October 15, 2013
    Head lines from the Daily Prophet. Lucius Malfoy and Narcissa Malfoy are please to announce the bonding of their Heir Draco Malfoy to Harry Potter. Both young men, who contributed much to the war effort, will finish their final year at Hogwarts and complete the bonding ceremony after graduation. HARRY POTTER SOLD TO PAY OFF DUMBLEDORE'S DEBTS. Was the lead article in the Quibbler. Harry Potter, 17, after having died twice to save the wizarding world was sold like a slave to appease known Death Eater Lucius Malfoy. Malfoy, who allied himself with the Dork Lord seventeen years ago, was not happy his homicidal lord returned, turned traitor to not have to pay for his sins. Dumbledore, as Harry's magicial guardian, promised Harry to Malfoy for being a traitor. If Harry did not comply, he would lose all of his Potter possessions to Malfoy and Dumbledore. Seems like a win for Dumbles. How sad for Harry. He has given his whole life for greedy wizards.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on October 14, 2013
    Ohhh the possibilities!!! I think I'm going to like this very much. Don't feel shy about updating as fast & often as you like. I'm a fast reader & will make all the time it takes so feel free to make the chapters as loooong as you like also! I don't mind...honest.
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  • From jami_lee on October 14, 2013
    Love the story!! Poor Harry!!
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