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Reviews for Two Are Better Then One

By : Ace1984
  • From EdTheBeast on March 07, 2020

    It's an excellent start. To bad never finished!


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  • From EdTheBeast on June 25, 2019

    It is a Fantastic story! Can't wait for more chapters!


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  • From EdTheBeast on June 25, 2019

    It is a fantastic story!  Just a few grammar & spelling errors.  You probably fixed the sorting of Ron.  If the hat was true, he would be slytherin or Hufflepuff! Betrayer, or loyal to family.


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  • From puppuphk on June 27, 2015
    You should totally update this story its a great story.
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  • From ANON - riffin on November 21, 2013
    Great . I've been waiting for this story. Can't wait to read more.
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  • From ANON - bill560682 on November 14, 2013
    now i think the best thing to happen to harry and rose would be for rose to wake up first and notice harry's little problem namely a hard on and decide to check it out since this would be something new she has never seen before namely is little penis standing up rock hard. an when harry wakes up rose talks harry into showing her how to make his hard on soft again. an of course the next step down this road would be her wanting to help him make it soft again.
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  • From ANON - Ana on November 11, 2013
    Really the sorting hat is called Trevor?
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  • From ANON - jhh on November 10, 2013
    Hi again!!!

    This is getting really interesting. I like the twist of Daphne being re-sorted into Griffindor, I agree I didn't like Dumbledore in the books, and I hope that, after so jealousy expected from Rose, the get along and grow closer, so they can again screw Dumbledore's plans.

    I'm starting to like the idea of Harry being with Rose,Daphne and of course Hermione, but I suppose it will take time before it will come to that.

    I love how Harry quickly realize why Rose was upset, and told her that she could use the invisiblilty cloak.

    Oh! And the bed scene when Rose appear with only her nigth-gown was great. I love that Rose is taking the lead showing Harry that she really love him. And what's best is that Rose succeded as she feel Harry's body reaction!!!

    I have to admit that it was clever how Dumbledore get Daphne see the task through getting the storne, but I don't like that she is using her.

    Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!




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  • From ANON - jhh on November 10, 2013
    Hi again!!!

    I like the way your are re-writting Harry's first year in Hogwarts. I agree it's so much better having a twin sister he can rely on.

    I think it was sweet Harry decided to stay with Rose in Hogwarts for Christmas, and I'm sure there will be many other oportunities to spend time with Daphne, and with Hermione of course!!!

    I love the scene of Harry giving Rose his present, and the next moment they are sharing this first kiss. I think it was cute and I think it's a good idea that you are starting to show them growing closer so it would be more natural when they are older.

    And now they have the invisibility cloak, they are going to discover many things like overhearing Dumbledore and Snape, althought this one was intended.

    I also like the effect that Rose has on Harry, so she can slow him, and make him think things and not acting on them rigth away.

    And I like hints like having them holding hands.

    Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!



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  • From dault3883 on November 10, 2013
    good story glad u brought it over here from fanfiction please keep writing
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  • From ANON - jhh on November 10, 2013
    Hi again!!!

    This was a great chapter too!! It's good that Harry is making new friends, most of them girls, so he is going to have plenty of them to choose when he gets older.

    I also love that it was Daphne the one Harry rescue, so they get close friends!!

    It was a really good idea that Harry talked about what happened with McGonagall in her office, so Snape couldn't hear!

    I also like that Harry told Rose and Hermione everything that had happened!!!

    Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - Jhh on November 09, 2013
    Hi Again !

    I love this chapter, I like how you are making Harry less inocent than the book when they discovered the toree headed dog.
    I like the introduction of Daphne, I'm sure they will become best friends shortly. Oh, and I love seeing Rose jealous of Daphne.
    I also love that Harry help Hermione at their first flying lesson.

    And the last scene with Harry conforting Rose was so cute and sweet. I'm looping forward to seing them getting closer l

    Again, thank you for this wonderful story and see you in next chapter
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  • From ANON - jhh on November 08, 2013
    Hi again!!!

    Another amazing chapter, where do I begin? I love that Rose trust Hermione about where she has spend the nigth, she didn't tell her the whole truth, but I think is one step closer to become best friends.

    I also love that in this story Harry get to class in time, and it was Ron who got late.

    Oh and I like that Harry was able to answer Snape questions so he didn't look like a fool..

    Again thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter
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  • From ANON - jhh on November 08, 2013
    Hi again!!!

    This story is getting better and better!!! I love how you made Hermione ther first friend, and I also love that they tell Ron to back off, they don't need him!!!

    As I suppose you put them all in Griffindor, which will make this easier for them to hang out.

    Oh! And the final scene where Rose went to Harry's bed to cuddle and sleep with him was really sweet.

    Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!!
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  • From ANON - jhh on November 08, 2013
    Hi again!!!

    I'm really loving the story!!! I like the twist that you made being McGonagall to go visit Harry and Rose.

    I think it's really sweet how close Harry and Rose are, and I'm curious about how it develop when they get older.

    Again, thank you for this amazing story and see you in next chapter!!

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