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Reviews for Missed Opportunities

By : thewandcrafter
  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 21, 2013
    What a tease! I can't wait for "tomorrow" when Severus will be back to see Harry and maybe...finally...Severus will make a definite move on Harry and Harry won't run away will he?
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  • From Arithmancer on December 21, 2013
    Oh my life, talk about sexual tension! I love Harry's career. Brilliant story, incredibly we'll written, can't wait for more.
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  • From NyxBlossom on December 21, 2013
    I need more! Its so good it hurts. Please. I need this story to end on a good note. They are so close , so close. Just a couple more little pushes. Ohhh this story is fantastic.
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  • From BAFan on December 21, 2013
    Progress at last! Er, I think.
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  • From ANON - CanisLupusUmbra on December 21, 2013
    Oh my grog yes I'm loving this story it's just this horribly awesome balance of angst and everything else. I was so mad that it came to the current chapter and it's this huge cliffhanger. But I'm hoping you finish this because wow I'm just loving it.
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  • From ANON - s on December 20, 2013
    this is by far the best and most well written story I have read in a long time, positively enthralling.
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  • From ANON - sara101 on December 20, 2013
    ...........why why why do you do this?! :( so close but yet so far! *pouts* please don't tease the two too much longer, I love it!
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  • From ANON - Anon on December 17, 2013
    I want them to get together so bad. I think Severus should just tell Harry he likes him because Harry is full of self doubt and giving little hints aren't working. Now that I think about it most guys don't get hints you have to directly say if you like them.
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  • From dantae on December 17, 2013
    I absolutely adore this story and cannot wait for more. You had me laughing and on the verge of tears, my stomach tied in knots and fingers shaking anxiously. Keep up the great work.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on December 15, 2013
    Chpt 1-12: Excellent! Love it. Well written, in fact one of the best stories around. Can't wait for more chapters.
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  • From ANON - BAFan on December 15, 2013
    Ch. 12

    Let's see if AFF will let me post this, since it violates their "one post per story" rule. *snort* Poor Harry, attacked in his own shop. But why did the Imperius work on him? Is it because it was in potion form rather than a curse? Actually, I guess it only partially worked, right? Because he was able to fight it off in the end.

    Anyway, can't wait for the next update.
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  • From ANON - michehp on December 15, 2013
    What an absolutely lovely story. Harry's angst in the early chapters, the slow build to romance.
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  • From BAFan on December 15, 2013
    Ch. 6

    Oy vey. Harry, Harry, Harry. *shaking head*
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  • From BAFan on December 15, 2013
    Ch. 5

    Good chapter. Such a rollercoaster of emotions, from jubilation at the beginning, to despair and melancholy in the middle, and then the return of happiness at the end. Great job.

    One thing: according to the HP Lexicon, it's Legilimency, not Legilimancy. Just thought I'd mention it.

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  • From BAFan on December 15, 2013
    Ch. 3

    "'Wow!' I said to myself. 'Oh my god
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