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Reviews for Fate Falls

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  • From BookDragon on August 12, 2017

    WOW

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  • From BookDragon on August 12, 2017

    I haven't finished yet but I wanted to tell you that this has become one of my very favorite Harry Potter Fanfictions.

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  • From BookDragon on August 11, 2017

    Chapter 26's margins are much wider than the previous margins. I hope the rest of the chapters are like the first few.

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  • From BookDragon on August 11, 2017

    Still loving this story but it is time for sleep (darn it)

    nitpik: expansive not expensive, even though we know the cottage is costly, the field is huge

    Let me know if you still want corrections and I'll make note of them when I read the story again.

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  • From BookDragon on August 10, 2017

    I'm loving this twist and am grateful it is a long, finished story!

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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    Ch 42  Sweet outtake


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    ch 41:  Think the story was awesome and different than most I'd read.  actual plot and not just smut for the sake of smut.....not that there is anything wrong with smut...:-D

    Nice seeing all the families together.  Wow  I thought Hermione would make the werewolf charms.

    Thank you for writing and sharing.


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    ch 40: awww the first flutter. Glad Albus got a HEA.   oooh Harry and Blaise related; didn't see that one coming. 
    What a wonderful boon to Hagrid.
    Sweet end scene


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    ch 39: Glad Draco was able to help himself. Balance....


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    ch 38: Glad Lucius is on thier side.  Go Bad Ass Teens!!!
    Awesome bargain Harry made for the hallows


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    ch 37:  hmm wonder how Voldy is going to take this bonding?  ROFL for Ron and his spider aversion.  awww for the white dog. Guess we get to see Voldy's reaction next. Sigh


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    ch 36: hmmm wonder if Sr will live through the telling?  I wondered what DDore was going to choose.  Better than death.  Wonder if it was just a test though. Doesn't seem right for him to be magicless.  Ah well.  awww Sanguine and lockhart....that's cute. Well that is one less death eater to worry about.
    Now what is Snape up to now?


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    ch 35: wowsers.  Fudge def abused his power.  LOVE that Sirius is now free.


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    ch 34:  wow  Hell of a choice DDore got.   Love Fudge getting what's coming to him. 
    Ya know I always wondered with all the medical magic and such, why Harry Potter never got his eyes fixed.
     


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  • From PsychoSmurf42 on June 08, 2017

    ch 33: Glad they were able to help Pansy's mom.  Cool new power for Harry.  The minsiter is not going to like the backlash of his scheming I'll bet.


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