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Reviews for A Life Never Lived

By : blade-of-the-shadows
  • From soloflamelady on August 16, 2018

    Has this story truly been abandoned? That makes me so sad. Come back and finish 


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  • From chrissy on June 04, 2018

    Hi,

    I'm just wondering if this story is going to be updated?

    cheers

    chris


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  • From chrissy on March 05, 2016
    Cool re-write!!! look forward to reading the rest of the story when it comes. :)
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  • From Calmzone1 on September 15, 2015
    hope you finish it
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  • From ANON - chesurKat on September 07, 2015
    Please update! I loved what was up for DNA.
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  • From enlyasuregon on September 19, 2014
    I Love it I love it I love it!!! Awesome chapter, great story I can't wait for more:)
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  • From ANON - librarycat9 on September 15, 2014
    I thought you should know of a plot hole (I think). Draco sees Harry without his short when he flips over and nothing is wrong. Then later his torso is blatantly abused. So unless I mis read something I thought you might like to know.
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  • From ANON - Kat on September 14, 2014
    Awesome!!!! Harry is strong and Snape too. Can't wait for more!!
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  • From ANON - autumngold on September 14, 2014
    Your story is great! I really wish, however, that you didn't end your last chapter without telling us what Harry is now going to look like. Will he be a redhead or a blonde? Hopefully his new form will be more pleasing to Severus than his old one. Excellent update! Please post another chapter soon!
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  • From WizzardBuddha on September 14, 2014
    Love the way this story is going. Please update soon :) also your take on the veela is pretty cool
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  • From ANON - staar on September 14, 2014
    thank you for the update and please do so soon !!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Ginnifer on September 08, 2014
    I loved how quickly the two became brothers, you could blame it on Veela instincts or something, the whole sibling rivalry bit was smart, it added character and understanding, so far a great story, hope to see your update soon.
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  • From fortheloveofDrizzt on September 03, 2014
    I enjoyed the first version of this immensely and am anxiously awaiting the new draft. I rarely review any stories unless I truly enjoy them. I enjoyed the way the fight between Ronnikins and Draco went this time. I also enjoyed that we had more of a Narcissa reaction to the news and how she was with Draco after learning about Harry. Now we can truly see her madness. The part about adding in Grimauld a second time made the story better than just having Harry waking up at Malfoy Manor being forlorn and dejected.

    Anxiously awaiting the next installment. But I have one final question, will Harry know immediately that Severus is his mate or will he know when his veela inheritance finally emerges?
    -Drizzt
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  • From ANON - staar on September 01, 2014
    Nice can't wait for more, I read the other one so I can't wait to see the different things our going to do now !!!!!!! see you soon !!!
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  • From ladyedgecombe on August 31, 2014
    So use your author name and make him a blade of the shadows. The ultimate of the shadow masters, a blade is a swordsman who wields a sward with accuracy that most could not. So a Shadow Blade would be the group of shadow demons that use the shadows for more than movement, they command them for what ever they want. Hence the reason Snape lives in the dungeons or shadows. You could even see how many would comment on the similarities between his creature and your name. Just think about the possibilities on what a shadow could do if commanded. A Shadow Blade could be the only one that can make the shadows solid so they can hold down people or tie them up.
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