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Reviews for Harry Potter: Monster Girl Quest

By : Almister
  • From ANON - Anon on September 13, 2014
    I really can't see what Hermoine had in Mind for giving Harry the Lockheart books that had been adult rated, inless they had come from Lockheart himself. Or if Hermoine had also been given a set since Lockheart thought he was doing them a favor or something.
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  • From ANON - Drake on September 07, 2014
    Thank you so much for this story. Its really amazing! Love it!! I enjoyed the fingering scene from previous vampire chapter. Perhaps you could include rimming scenes later too :)
    Please update more. Very good story. Hope the plot will move faster and scene with Hermonie!!
    Thank you!
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  • From ANON - TT on August 31, 2014
    And so nan other story dies, to be forgotten in the depths of the site.

    Too bad. I was really enjoying it.
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  • From ANON - Hank Jones on August 31, 2014
    Frickin' love this story man. Keep it coming! tons of stuff to still explore, you've got a good writing style too.
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  • From DJthaVampire on August 16, 2014
    Please update soon this is an amazing story
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  • From jesmurd27 on August 12, 2014
    I've been lurking for a little bit now. quite accidentally stumbled upon this story and had to sign up to wipe a review. love the story and hope to see more. if you're still looking for ideas soy me a response and would love to share. keep it up please, really good story.
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  • From jesmurd27 on August 12, 2014
    I've been lurking for a little bit now. quite accidentally stumbled upon this story and had to sign up to wipe a review. love the story and hope to see more. if you're still looking for ideas soy me a response and would love to share. keep it up please, really good story.
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  • From ANON - Daniel14541 on August 11, 2014
    Awesome. Any chance Harry is going to get around to Hermione soon? I'm really personally looking forward to those scene's.
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 07, 2014
    Don't forget all the creatures that are encountered that year.
    And the previous.
    Centaur
    Unicorn
    Acromantula
    Basilisk
    Post Owl?
    Kneezel?
    Giant Squid?
    Heck almost anything can be found in the forest....
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 03, 2014
    Just wanted to say I'm glad you're not bothered by the negative feedback. Your sexual encounters have variety and are well-written, the relationships are nicely done, and Harry's believable. If people can't handle a bit of adventurous sex they're on the wrong bloody website. Keep up the good work. A full-on RPG video game story like this isn't the easiest thing to plan out, and so far you're doing a really excellent job of keeping it lively and coherent. I just hope you've got all the stats and perks stored up in spreadsheets so that it'll all make sense further down the line :)
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  • From ANON - Justin on August 03, 2014
    cool story, since you asked some ideas

    Naga: snake woman, could tie into the basilisk,
    Mermaid: they're in Black lake so why not?
    Wood elf: find them in the Forbidden forest, have Luna or Naomi help in finding them as they're fae

    Harry finds out that he can redo a conquest bonus for a species as long as it's a new unconquered partner of the same species. Allows Harry to get skipped bonuses or stack already taken bonuses.

    Nora develops her hoarding compulsion to get Harry new conquests, as she'll live for millennia she wants Harry to make lots of babies (even if he doesn't want to) so there'll aways be some of Harry around. Also takes up potions to make the antidote for the sterility potion, backfires in different ways.

    Harry develops mind control powers after his revenge on the vampire, constitution checked, bigger the difference the more control, from no influence at all, all the way to willingly signing a slavery contract.

    Harry discovers a meta-quest the Heart of Hogwarts, The four founders of Hogwarts have each have a quest, upon completing the quest Harry gets a key to the Heart of Hogwarts. After gathering all four keys Harry does a final quest to get into the Heart Chamber to battle with the Guardian of Hogwarts to gain control of the Heart. When he has control he can reshape reality in Hogwarts however he wants. Example: Harry makes the witches uniform shoes, socks, a tie, and a warming charm and that's it, and no one will think it weird because that's the way its always been.

    Hope the ideas help
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  • From eknae11 on August 03, 2014
    hey this is a very entertaining story. the game aspect is great sometimes i wish real life was like that. maybe you should have one of harry's friends catch him in the act and then see what happens whether they are disgusted or intrigued
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2014
    MORE GINNY!
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  • From ANON - Anon on August 02, 2014
    I really like this story so far! It's hot, but I also think it's really cool the way you've kept the plot of the book basically, just changed certain details to still get to the same place. And did I mention it's hot? I didn't know that F/D stood for futanari but I also don't really care. The story is rated adult ++ anyway, and you warned us Harry was kinky lol! Anyway, wherever this story goes, I'll happily read it. Sorry to hear people were bitching, but I think Harry would know what to do with those assholes (he would fuck them). So fuck 'em! Looking forward to your next chapter!
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  • From ANON - Oryx on August 02, 2014
    I'd be happy to let you bounce ideas off me if you need. I'm a huge fan of what you've written so far and I'm excited for more. Felt like a shorter chapter this time around but for the sake of moving the plot that sounds reasonable enough.
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