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Reviews for The Heart of the Sun

By : Lomonaaeren
  • From ANON - Eli on August 30, 2015
    I'm not quite sure how I was expecting this story to end. I'm feeling a rather complicated mix of sad and confused, but also content. Yet another wonderful tale.
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  • From on May 11, 2015
    Love your writing and your view of the characters but didn't like the very end of this one so much. Sounded more like they were going to be casual aquaintances with priviledges...not even friends or living together!! Sad very sad. They won't have a relationship and will drift apart.
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on November 19, 2014
    Aw,man. That was lovely. It amazes me how you put so much thought and love into each of your characters and each of your storys and even though the characters are the same they are not. It is different every time and I can't belive that after all you have written you are still able to amaze me like this. So beautiful. On a different note though, this story makes me really want to read pride and predjedice with Harry and Sev in the main roles :D Fitting yes?
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  • From BAFan on June 23, 2014
    Grr, that was an exercise in frustration! Those two were being even more obtuse than usual, til I just wanted to smack their heads together. :-) However, I still enjoyed this. It had its own kind of fascination. How many times would they misinterpret what the other said? Good job!

    And I can hardly believe it, but I think I may have found an error, which is almost unheard of for your work:

    ". . . Even that first disastrous morning after the handfasting, Severus had had plenty to say, all of it article and (what Severus had thought was) well-argued." Did you mean articulate?
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  • From Briarrows69 on June 20, 2014
    I really loved this story, and I wish there was some sort of follow up of happy (or as happy as Snape can get) times after this decision
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on June 18, 2014
    I liked it but do wish that it was plainer what they would have now. Nothing just more than acquaintance...sleeping together occasionally because Severus doesn't want handfasting, bonding, marriage or any other kind of binding. He doesn't want to join or have friends over or to go to because they are loud and move around too much. Jeez Louise! I hope Severus understands how much Harry must care for him to be part of this to put up with it with so little in it for him just the very occasional bedding with little to no emotion...their not even going to live together! Yes I still say I liked it because it showed how very damaged he was and didn't try very much to "get better" & have a relationship with Harry who he supposedly cares for at least if not loves. Arghh! I hope you know what I mean!
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