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Reviews for Innocence Grown *COMPLETE*

By : Talented_Mrs_Lupin
  • From WillZel on March 22, 2019

    Wait what?? That's the end?? I just read the entire innocent series and this is where it stops??!! Noooo! I need to see what happened!!! 


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  • From demonsangel on August 06, 2014
    That was an interesting and sad chapter to read. I feel kind of bad for Lidia. It's like people forget she has TWO parents. All everyone ever see's is her dad. What about the fact that she is Hermione's daughter? Doesn't that count for something? I mean, look at all the good Hermione did and how values and beliefs. How many people she tried to help. Is it so hard to believe that Lidia would have gotten some of that as well? And that coming form Remus, that was just harsh.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on August 05, 2014
    aww that's a sad way to end it. :( i hope they work things out... please update again soon im dying to read what happens next for them!
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  • From demonsangel on July 24, 2014
    Still trying to figure out how to properly review this XD I liked this chapter. I have to wonder, is Lucius being haunted by his wife? Or is his grief blinding him and making it so that he is unable to see her ghost which would give him closer and now that he is finally talking about it more he is starting to let go and getting to the point where he can see her? I must admit I like that option lol. After something like that, you really do need the closure...Anyways, I did like this chapter! Can't wait to read more.
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  • From demonsangel on July 18, 2014
    I never did get the "younger and prettier" fear, but then again, maybe I'm not old enough too. I think once Pansy see's how wrapped up in each other Lidia and Remus (I almost said Draco and Remus lol) are, I don't think she will worry anymore. As for Luci and Lidia, I can see the two of those forming a good friendship. He would be great at advising her both in what extra classes to take, but also in business ideas and many other things, while she would keep him on his toes. It would be good for both of them. He gets companionship in a non-romantic way (which I think he needs in this story given how clearly devoted he sounded to his wife), she gets an insight into things that she may not have given she is not a pure-blood.

    Can't wait to read more!
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  • From demonsangel on July 17, 2014
    Ah, yeah, that would be a good reason lol. Thanks for explaining it! I like the interaction between Lucius and Lidia, it's different and fun lol. Grr at you though...seriously, I hear that song ONCE and it is stuck in my head forever. *sighs* ANYWAYS, this was a really sweet chapter, and nostalgic. When we were kids we had the same tradition of opening one present on Christmas Eve.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on July 16, 2014
    i love where this is going, im glad that everyone is getting there happy ending. and that Lidia and Remus are mates.
    i think Lidia can save maybe 2 for Lucius lol
    well wonderful story and please update again soon :)
    im looking every day for updates to get my fix lol
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  • From demonsangel on July 16, 2014
    The Sev/Nat thing I get and kind of saw. The Lanni/Scorp with a baby? Nope, didn't see that one coming! Another nice twist, especially with Lucius thrown in there. Hopefully he will shape up though! Wanted to slap Draco when one of the first questions was "blood status." I may have asked this before but I am confused (and it's late so yeah) doesn't Draco know Lidia? I mean, I know it has been a while, but didn't he run the camp she was sent too as a child?

    Also...was Uncle Thor helping his little niece? lol. Loved the little warning rumble. SO, how blindsided was everyone with Loki? lol. I could see Lidia having expected something like that, as I don't recall him ever actually freaking out on her. He always seemed more calm and "mature" when dealing with Lidia.
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  • From demonsangel on July 15, 2014
    YOU can't wait for the next chapter? *huffs* What about the rest of us?! *laughs and bows* Happy to be of service. LOVED the twist of seeing each others past, and future as a way to show they were mates. That was brilliant. And the last chapter, that just had me laughing! I loved how you handled that, especially with Snape. Keeping with the perverted comments while still being serious was hilarious. The baggage going ahead was different, I've never read that idea. Figures it would land on someone's foot though lol. I love how everything was handled and can't wait to read more. It's sad though that he still feels no one will believe him. I mean, that's his family...
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  • From demonsangel on July 06, 2014
    See now, this is exactly why I do my best to avoid places like that. But then, my family has always been sensitive to that sort of thing (and it is NOT fun) and you have to be very careful because you can unintentionally bring an unwanted guest back with you. Not all are bad mind you, but not all are good. Getting rid of it can be tricky -.- ANYWAYS, great chapter. Poor Liddy, you would think though, given part of the world she comes from, she would be more open minded about that sort of thing. Anyways, can't wait to read more! Would be kind of funny if she somehow wound up with a friendly ghost guardian lol.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on July 03, 2014
    aww that is sad:( maybe Lidia can be her new family?
    well please update again soon
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  • From demonsangel on July 03, 2014
    O.O Someone needs to pull a Molly Weasley and make that girl part of the family asap! Poor Nat. Great twists though. I wonder how Lidia will react to Kale's message. Hopefully in a hilarious manner lol. Cant wait to read more!
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  • From demonsangel on June 30, 2014
    What kind of teacher allows students to behave like that!? There should never be a need to have another student point out how wrong you were like that. Sheesh, I hope that man learned from that experience, especially AFTER he had already told one student to stop harassing her! *shakes her head* Nice to see Scorp is going to try and get along! Can't wait to read more.
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  • From demonsangel on June 30, 2014
    I love how fast you get these out. You are amazing. I like the start of this! Nat seems interesting and I hope Remus doesn't suddenly decide to be standoffish with Lidia. Honestly though, I can't find it in myself to feel bad for Scorpius. We all make choices in life and have to face the consequences and he repeatedly made the choice to be mean, hurtful and harass a girl. He may not approve of hitting women, but what he did fell in the same lines. In the end, it came back to bite him. Yes, Lidia did something that caused it in a sense, but so did he. Besides, I think not getting what he wants this time may actually do him some good. It got him out of Europe and into a completely different culture with nearly completely new people. Should really open his eyes. Plus it gives him and Lidia a chance at a new starting point so that maybe they can at least become friends (or just tolerate one another lol) Can't wait to read more!
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