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Reviews for The Dove

By : lexiatel
  • From ArielKidd on April 08, 2016
    So I finally got around to reading this, and I'm so glad I did! I'm not opposed to OCs, given that I write about my own OC. But most others are, and it's a shame really. This story didn't get nearly enough interest or reviews for how enthralling and captivating it really is. Scorpius is so beyond fucked up, he literally makes me feel sick. Literally. Like, I'm disgusted by him to my core. And I can stomach some dark characters! But with him, I think it's more centred on the fact that he changed. That she loved him and vice versa, and now he treats her like that with no remorse. It's disgusting. Completely unredeemable. And that's credit to your writing skills! The more you can make a reader react to your work, the better! Even though I'm repulsed by Scorpius, I can't stop reading. 'Cause his character is captivating, I'm rooting for your OC, and the storyline is interesting. I'm glad AFF have taken away the ratings system as, I read in your A/N's, this story was rated poorly for whatever reason. I can't understand how a story like this would be rated negatively, only that the people reading it ignore the initial warnings in place. Unfortunately, readers like that plague the net. We can never escape them! Much love! AKxx - I'm off to finish the sequel now!
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  • From ANON - Hurricane_Bridgette on March 20, 2016
    Oh...phew. Not the same Scorpious. :)
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  • From ANON - Hurricane_Bridgette on March 20, 2016
    Wow... just wow. So this is Scoprious from the curse story? How could he get so crazy woth all that love they are giving him? My mond is spinning. Congrats
    I need to finish this one and the other sfory you have on Dove and Scoprious. It is the curse? Something messed him up? Man.. anywyas. Okay
    . Off to read. :)
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  • From ANON - De Noir fan on February 16, 2016
    Never mind I found the sequel! Awesome.
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  • From ANON - De Noir fan on February 16, 2016
    This was dark but I loved it! I was sad when I came to the last chapter. Was that the end?
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  • From dracohermione on April 02, 2015
    i was enjoying the story oh so much
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  • From CU_Spacecowboy on October 06, 2014
    If he's insinuating that Ginny can be raped because she's a pure blood even though she's married then doesn't that the wives and daughters of his followers including his own mother would also be subjected to the same thing which should start an uproar among his followers.
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  • From ANON - HEARTSTAR on October 05, 2014
    poor Grace ! hmm I would like to see where you take this
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  • From ANON - Just_A_Reader on September 14, 2014
    I love, love, love this story! I'm usually hesitant about original characters, but Dove fits seamlessly in the Potter family; I can almost picture her as a canon fourth Potter kid. I love this AU and am amazed by your writing. I can't wait for the next chapter!
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  • From CU_Spacecowboy on September 02, 2014
    If he can send her the note then wouldn't he know where she is and just go get her?
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  • From milapink on August 18, 2014
    I'm impressed with the story.
    Why Scorpius is so crazy?
    I'm super curious as to why Draco recovered them.
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  • From Eclectic_Pet on August 02, 2014
    I must admit this premise for a story is frightening and alluring at the same time. I love the character of Dove and that the Potters were each from a different house; allowing them have the full traits of the Wizarding World. But I have to admit that the summary GRABBED by attention.
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