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Reviews for The Guile and Devotion of a Black Heir

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From enlyasuregon on November 24, 2014
    OMG! I just found your story and I love it! This is a twist and pairing that I would never have thought of and you are doing an amazing job with it. I like how Harry is holding on to his new family with both hands, refusing to let go. I really think that most people would do something similar in that type of situation. I also think you are doing a wonderful job with the Lestrange's as there really isn't much to go with in the books or the movies. I can't wait for more! :)
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  • From ANON - Rita on November 23, 2014
    i love this story, i really like what you have decided to do with harry's character and i cant wait to see his revenge. i am also looking forward to more interaction with his betrothed. also curious if the twins are also anti-harry, im hoping that they end up on harry's side.
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  • From ANON - Sealpotter on November 23, 2014
    Not my usual reading fare, but excellent. I am hooked and will wait for more. I do hope there is a happy Harry ending... I am a sucker for those. I do love the build up and in depth plot. I do so wish Harry could bring Remus and Hermione with him on this new venture. But I shall wait and see.
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  • From ANON - Wasparkman on November 22, 2014
    FYI - I reported blackwolf's plagiarism on Thursday. The moderator responded very quickly, investigated, and blackwolf's stories were removed earlier today for the offense. Blackwolf's very pale copy of a unique and entertaining take on Harry Potter is now gone, the plagiaist is in the Hall of Shame, and we can continue to enjoy StarLight_Massacre's lovely tale.
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  • From ANON - z on November 21, 2014
    hey absolutely love your stories always a good read, just thought you should know that BlackWolf has pretty much plagiarised this story....in their story the truth....its basically a poorly written version of yours with like a couple of name changes...
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  • From ANON - Jane on November 20, 2014
    ughhhhh I love youuu :)) basically every single one of your stories are on my reading list and I constantly check for updates. Every single one of your stories is a dream and I can't ever stop waiting for updates. Keep up the fantastic work lovely :)
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  • From ANON - Tiny on November 19, 2014
    I can't wait to see how the relationship between Harry and Rabastan develops. Especially their first kiss who will initiate it, what the situation will be etc. Oh and how will Dumbledor react when he finds out who Harry is betrothed to. Fabulous story :D
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  • From ANON - L on November 19, 2014
    I am really enjoying this so far! I love your characterization of everyone, they fit well as AU versions of the characters. I would love to see more interaction between Harry and Rabastan, you talk of their bond, but we haven't really got to see it yet.

    I cannot wait to see where you going with all of Dumbledore's schemes, he needs to put in his place and taken down a few notches... in a spectacular way.

    I await your next update!

    - L
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  • From Nyouko on November 19, 2014
    Wow, love this story and I am not a big fav of Harry with anyone besides Draco or Hermione. Your story is thought out and written really well. I really love the story plot. I want to know what happens next. Will Harry be join Voldemort? The only thing I am worried about is if you are going to have Voldemort change his ways or if Harry is going to join him like he is now. If you do the second one that would just change Harry to much. Well, I hope you update soon. Thanks for a great beginning of a story.
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  • From ANON - Dominique 1 on November 18, 2014
    love the story so far as far as the Gryffindors there is Neville Ron Dean famous all in the same room so all of them are some of them had to have destroyed his property I hope Lucius makes them pay for it specially the Weasley charges them for destruction of property I also hope he gets a Firebolt back in one piece nothing wrong with it if not then I also hope that Harry tells him that he was supposed to be sorted into Slytherin and gets transferred over at this point in time I say the all the door should die and what about the life debt like Sarah so James like that and the debt went to little hairy when Harry have a life get for her my knee Jenny Weasley Arthur the family the family for the snake Chicago that s*** in it makes me super f*** up specially you should have watched it 4 Peter Pettigrew so maybe you can get Peter to kill Bella
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  • From Lady_Arachne on November 18, 2014
    Loved the chapter!
    Trust me when I say that I was practically vibrating in excitement on the way home from the training center! This was the first time that I didn't immediately read the new chapter the moment I saw the notification for it! D:

    I absolutely love that Harry blew up at Dumbledore, hopefully whatever Dumbledore has planned gets thwarted before it can do a damaging effect on Harry! And I loved the progress Rabastan and his brother are making, I wonder if you'll add a scene of Rabastan thinking of ways to pleasure Harry...maybe that scene will come after he gives Harry the engagement ring and when he's a little stronger? A scene of him daydreaming (or dreaming) of pleasuring Harry will be amazing! :D

    And I'm also looking forward to the next chapter! The Lucius and Narcissa scene, the bonding moment between Harry and Hegwig, really looking forward to tbe next chapter! :D
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on November 18, 2014
    Enjoying the story & this chapter for sure. We are begining to see more middle of the road Harry...doesn't want to fight voldemort while "grown ups" stay safe but is willing to kill someone who he considers deserves it...Bella. Kind of a practical, lets get on together & leave my family alone or else, Harry.
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on November 18, 2014
    I stand corrected. Wonderful chapter. I'm glad to see that Harry's adoption is part of some deeper plot, but that Lucius' paternal feelings for Harry are real. He wouldn't be a Slytherin if that wasn't so.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on November 18, 2014
    I can't even begin to tell you how much I am enjoying your incredible story! Dumbledore must be a complete idiot, does he really think letting the Gryffindors torment Harry and steal his stuff will make him want to fight for them? If he had any brains at all, he would be using Ron and Hermione to get back into Harry's good graces. Was Dumbledore the one who stole Harry's broom? I could see him hidding it away and trying to use it as a bargening tool. Personally, even though the bad guys may not be good, I still think they are treating Harry better than the "good" guys do. Thank you for the wonderful update! I can't wait to see what will happen when Lucius comes to the school. Can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - staar on November 18, 2014
    the more you write the more I love this !!!!!!!!! Can't and do believe how everyone is acting and doing things to Harry ...so glad that Draco and Blaise are there for him....ha me laughing that Harry got rid of Ginny in that game of theirs ......oh please update sooner than later on this it's so good !!!!!!!!!!! see ya soon !!!!!!! *** you have really gotten me to like Harry's going to be bonded!!!!!!!
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