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Reviews for The Guile and Devotion of a Black Heir

By : StarLightMassacre
  • From ANON - Viral on September 25, 2014
    Interesting to see you get into the "Lordship" trope :P it must be fun for you to have the change. But I wonder, how much would they actually let a teenager make important decisions? This is government, after all. One of our politicans is getting a lashing right now for being too young and incompetent and I'm pretty sure he's at least 30. So will it be hard for Harry to gain respect?
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  • From ANON - autumngold on September 25, 2014
    Fabulous beginning to your story! Thank you for having Harry slowly be learning that all things aren't black and white, and that all Slytherins aren't evil. I am so glad that he has Lucius in his corner, hopefully that will help him with Dumbledore's manipulations. At least Dumbledore will no longer be able to use Harry's Wizengamot seats. Very interesting story! I can't wait to find out what you have planned for Harry next!
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  • From NinaSweets on September 25, 2014
    Amazing start!!! I can't wait to read more, this is such an interesting idea I can't wait to see where it goes
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  • From Lady_Arachne on September 24, 2014
    Interesting.
    I loved the preview that you had posted on Facebook, and I'm so glad that you decided to make a story out of it! I really loved how you added more details to the preview and I am really looking forward to Lucius drilling Draco on how he behaved in Hogwarts; I hope you add that scene! :D

    I thought there was a scene where Harry told them about the extra keys to his trust funds that Dumbledore and Molly had, but maybe that will be discussed later on in the story! I can't remember on whether you'd be making Hermione and Ron the bad guys, but I hope you do! :D

    Really looking forward to the next chapter, thank you for doing this! :D
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  • From ANON - mistalis on September 24, 2014
    I love this story, and cannot wait to see what way it goes keep up the good work.
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  • From ANON - stena on September 24, 2014
    I love your new story as I have all of your story's I have read so far you have a way of righting that just draws you in so once again I LOVE it
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  • From ANON - Boudreaux on September 24, 2014
    This is an awesome start for a story, and I look forward eagerly to the next chapter. I really like that while you are clearly making Lucius one of the good guys in this, you have kept the essence of the original character, that self assured arrogance that he knows who and what he is.
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  • From cullengal101 on September 24, 2014
    hey
    love this so far
    great first start I was absolutely hooked when I started to read it I couldn't stop until I finished
    cant wait for the next chapter please keep updating
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - Taza on September 24, 2014
    If I could hug you I would. I love your stories and I'm engrossed from the word go.
    Great work and looking forward to the next instalment.
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  • From BAFan on September 23, 2014
    Ch. 1

    Great start! I love Lucius's outrage over Umbridge's use of a Blood Quill. Can't wait to see what else you have in store for us. I did notice one error:

    "...he had to get out, being trapped and locked up in this house with his disgusting, hateful relatives was driving him insane, but he
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  • From ANON - Littletenyo on September 23, 2014
    I was literally reading this and I was like "Finally a good fanfic just came out" and when I got to the end I wanted more and then I saw the author and I was like "oh thats why I like this so much!" I am happy you got a new story out and I cant wait for this and The Raise of Draken to update.
    One of your many faithful readers
    -Littletenyo
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2014
    I've loved all your stories so far and this is no different.
    I am really looking forward to how this one is going to play out.
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on September 23, 2014
    This is the start of what looks to be a terrific story just the kind I like best! I'll have to go back to see what the pairing will be. My favorite is Severus/Harry with Draco/Harry a close second. I've read a couple others that proved to be good though (Lucius was one of them).
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  • From ANON - Theriel on September 23, 2014
    Amazing, Star. What can I say?, you are one of the best writers, If I like the preview, now I simply fell In love with it. Yes you
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  • From ANON - Anon on September 23, 2014
    I like the start. There are not enough well written RLestrange/HP fics. Looking forward to the next chapter.
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