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By : Giovanna
  • From ANON - Naomi on February 18, 2015
    This is a really great story and I can't wait to see what happens next with Arthur and who it is that 'he was with at the time of Molly's death'. Please update as soon as possible!!!
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  • From cullengal101 on February 17, 2015
    hi
    great story so far
    I wonder who it is that is saying he was with Arthur
    just one little point as I am not sure if u did it intentionally or not but the Weasley children goes bill, Charlie, Percy, twins.
    not bill, Charlie, twins and then Percy. just wanted to point it out as again wasn't sure if it was intentional, as admittedly it did confuse me a little as I started thinking that the twins shouldn't be born if Arthur remembers the last time he slept with molly was before Percy was born
    but other than that absolutely love this story so far
    please keep updating soon.
    cullengal101
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  • From ANON - ronnie on February 17, 2015
    this is a great chapter please update quickly!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - staar on February 16, 2015
    I am so proud of Arthur !!!!!!!! so good of an actor he is ...Molly got want she deserved ....I wonder if it's one of the older boys that came to the rescue for him...so good ....Thanks for this and hope all is well with you !!!
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  • From ANON - Naomi on February 07, 2015
    This is an amazing story and I really can't wait to see what Harry does next. Please update soon!!!!!
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  • From Alex on January 18, 2015
    Love this story so much!
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  • From ANON - Diana on January 10, 2015
    Update soon!
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  • From Foxluna on December 29, 2014
    ohhhhh i can't wait to read what happens next. and im starting to think that maybe Arthur weasley was under something from the very beginning... or maybe now he is finally realizing the truth that his own sons have been trying to point out to him for the longest time; years really.
    oh also how do i add an author and a story to my favs on here? cuz i would like to add u and your story to that list if i can.
    laters,
    Fox
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  • From wavedancer70 on December 02, 2014
    Please update please
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  • From BAFan on October 28, 2014
    Ch. 8

    Poor Snape, he's getting a lot of shocks in this one. *snicker* Good chapter!

    ". . . Holding Fenrir, who was still in wolf form, by the gruff of his neck. . . ."

    I think you mean "scruff" not gruff.
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  • From BAFan on October 28, 2014
    Ch. 5

    That was a most interesting dream . . . or whatever it was! Whew. ^o^

    I've decided that for each chapter I review, I'll pick one misspelling to bring to your attention. That way I won't inundate you with corrections and maybe you'll remember the single one I point out. If you would rather I not do this, just say so and of course I'll stop.

    ". . . This spurned Harry on more, he wanted to make his Master proud because he was able to please him in something as simple as swallowing him whole."

    I see this mistake a lot. "Spurned" means rejected. (She spurned his offer of marriage.) The word you want is "spurred," which means to urge on or incite, as in spurring a horse to go faster.

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  • From ANON - snape_lust on October 25, 2014
    Quite enjoyable. I'm especially glad that you have included the notion of boundaries and equality within Tom and Harry's relationship. It makes it so much more interesting to read. I laughed when harry took him to task for treating him like a DE and informing Tom he will punish DE's that don't listen to him.

    Lastly, I think this is the only story I've read that is adult enough to acknowledge that people have different roles in and out of the bedroom. Just because someone might like to assume a sub role while fucking doesn't mean they'll tolerate it once the clothes are back on. I know I certainly don't :-) I can't tell you how many times I've had to educate my partner(s) to that fact.

    Well done!! I can't wait for more!
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  • From ANON - Meiya on October 25, 2014
    And off they go to Hogwarts yay :D The fun is just beginning. Can't wait to find out what's wrong with Mr Weasley. Was a great chapter (9).
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  • From ANON - staar on October 25, 2014
    Thanks for this but hope I don't have to wait long...I want to see how he kills ron,hermione, ginny !!!!!! enjoyed the updates see you soon !!!!!
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  • From BAFan on October 23, 2014
    Ch. 4

    "He smiled as if the answer was so simple even a child could figure it out. He stood up walked over to me brazenly and sat in my lap, running his hands through my hair. He leaned in and whispered ever so seductively in my ear 'I am going to kill Albus Dumbledore.'
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