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Reviews for Giving A Chance

By : Leania07
  • From ANON - Kat on February 10, 2015
    Awesome. And the tense thing isn't to bad.
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  • From ANON - starr on February 10, 2015
    Wow who are the 2 that were talking at the end of the chapter ??????? not good if they are from the bad side !!!!! so good can't wait for MORE !!!!!!! Thanks for this !!!
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  • From ANON - Mashkai on February 07, 2015
    Lovely story! I like it thus far and am looking forward to more. Thanks for sharing!
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  • From ANON - staar on February 07, 2015
    well we can see again how the headmaster is an ass and hope all well....OMG now I have to wait to see what Lily wore to Snape !!!!!!! Thanks for this and please update soon !!!!!!:):)):):):)):):):)
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  • From BAFan on February 04, 2015
    Ch. 1-3

    You have an interesting story here. I like that the Trio are all reaching out to the Slytherins and Snape and Harry are working together. One comment: You are mixing up your tenses. You started out in the past tense (he said, she turned), which is what most books use, but then suddenly you'll switch to the present tense (he says, she turns). There's nothing wrong with writing in the present tense, but you need to stick to one or the other. 😃

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  • From ANON - Anon on February 04, 2015
    I like the progress here. Looking forward to Harry claiming his titles.
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  • From Jan on February 04, 2015
    Interesting start, I can't wait for more, it seems this is going to be a Gryffindor/Slytherin pairing, very interesting indeed ^_^ please update chapter 3 soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 03, 2015
    Interesting
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  • From ANON - delia cerrano on February 02, 2015
    Great begining! Very fresh and already has me involved. Albus deserves to be bashed after the way he left Harry at the Dursleys' no matter what he said didn't keep him in the loop even if it was his life!.
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  • From ANON - staar on February 02, 2015
    So good of a start, can't wait for more !!!!
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  • From ANON - djaddict on February 02, 2015
    Excellent beginning! Eagerly awaiting more!
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  • From ANON - Anon on February 02, 2015
    Really good start, looking forward to more.
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  • From ANON - autumngold on February 01, 2015
    Love the beginning to your story! Thank goodness Harry and Severus are going to have each other to rely on. Hopefully, with each others help, they will be able to survive the final battle. Excellent story! Can't wait for more!
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