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Reviews for Room-mate\'s Surprise

By : S-Mutt
  • From ANON - Leo on March 29, 2016
    Padma follow-up? Could always pass it off as that cliche about magical twins experiencing everything that's happening to the other, so the entire time Hermione's been fucking Parvati Padma's been on her bed in the Ravenclaw dorm feeling the same sensations.
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  • From ANON - KT on March 04, 2016
    I don't know why I love this so much, but I do. I would LOVE you to expand it.
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  • From RykOakwine on October 05, 2015
    It's difficult to tell if the story isn't any good or if the kinks the story beats on repeatedly just aren't my thing. That's where reviewing adult stories is more difficult than reviewing straight stories I suppose.

    The technical writing is okay. It's not great, there's a few spots that could use Polish, but it's okay.

    Characterization is poor. Sure, Hermoine is certainly the D type but it's a bit implausible to see her shouting "suck my cock!" and slapping her roomie around without giving her a safe word.

    This one is a futanari Hermoine, gifted with a giant human cock due to the polyjuice accident when she was 13. Why does she have a giant human cock and balls instead of a feline cock? Who knows. Why are 99% of futanari fics ruined by giant horse cocks and females who can take horse cocks up the ass without blinking? Who knows. Why is her human cock ginormous, bigger around than her arm? Who knows. Why can she cum so many times that she causes her victims bellies to bulge with semen (Cumbelly? Really?) and how did she manage to get her victims wombs to be pressure sealed so that the semen doesn't just dribble out? Or jet put under great pressure since it's forcing them to swell? Who knows!

    Eh. If it's your thing maybe you'll enjoy it?
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  • From ANON - Girminie on September 13, 2015
    Please update!!! I wanna see Ginny there and maybe a foursome with Ginny lavender and the other chick
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 31, 2015
    Love it! Can't wait for the next chapter =)
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  • From ANON - EAnIL on April 26, 2015
    Please continue. I love Dom!Hermione more so when she's futa. Let her conqure the lady's of Harry Potter. Make them her slaves and some her lovers. But always Dominant and Top Hermione.
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  • From ANON - nari-chan on February 26, 2015
    please please add more to this story !!!! this is a wonderful treat and made me squirm with delight !!! so please consider adding more to this story its amazing and had me wanting more sooo much more
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