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Reviews for The Little Butterfly

By : ChrisF.
  • From Sif-Shadowheart on August 31, 2015
    Very excited to see where you're going with this.
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  • From ANON - DarkDrake( or DArkSilver) on March 25, 2015
    It was excellent....keep it up! And do not worry so much about mistakes, they happen...You have a wonderful and refreshing story. Kiss( sorry for this i am European...we are a bit affectionate...)
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  • From ANON - ChaosLady on March 14, 2015
    Excellent update!
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 14, 2015
    I understand what you mean. The more often you read over the same text the less likely you are to find the errors that slipped past your notice. That happens to everyone. When someone points them out later on, you'll ask yourself how you could have missed it in the first place, especially when the mistakes are quite obvious.
    My comment was also not meant harshly, I just mentioned it in case you weren't aware of the little pitfalls of software like that (I know a couple of people who used a similar program and were surprised that there were mistakes in their text and that it had to be proofread afterwards).
    Anyway, I quite enjoyed the chapter and your take on the story is refreshing.
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  • From ANON - Anon on March 05, 2015
    Really good start, looking forward to what's next.
    Just a little thing - if you use dictation software, I found that you have to proofread and make sure that everything is as you wanted it even more than normally because of the nature of the software. Sometimes it puts punctuation in where it is not warranted, separating sentences or puts in words that might sound phonetically similar to what you said but don't necessarily have the meaning you wanted or it leaves out words or parts of sentences (all of which happened in this first chapter as well a couple of times).
    For example, when Luna gives the ambrosia to Harry, she says "Danny" gave it to her when it is supposed to be "Daddy" which is what Harry thinks she said a couple of lines further down or when Fudge talks about having the "potion" confiscated but it says complicated instead.
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