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Reviews for Something Lost. Something Found

By : Sneffita
  • From teriwright on May 23, 2015
    It was a very good start and definitely caught my interest. I look forward to where you take this story.

    Since I was utterly bored today and was looking for any excuse to ignore my housework, I decided to take you up on your offer of welcoming constructive criticism and nit picking for grammar and spelling errors. Below is what I found.

    I want to say that these suggestions in no way detracted from my enjoyment of your story. Again, I was bored and had the time and inclination.

    cheers!
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    *"The more he wrote the more his furry and felling of betrayal rose" - should be (s/b) "fury" and "feeling"

    *"He had set out to find a book about the mind arts in the Restricted..." - s/b "Mind Arts" capitalized

    *"...from the time he lived with the Dursley
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