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Reviews for Unhinged (COMPLETE)

By : nikki13088
  • From Mapaes94 on March 20, 2024

    Its actually incredible the way you describe Ginny emotions, just 3 chapters and I am alredy crying. I never thought of them as a cople but the way you develop the relationship you made me love them.


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  • From Lily-Hopper on December 05, 2019

    What a ride! I had a blast reading this, and i can't wait till you've finished the sequel. I won't start on it until you're done with it because i'm not really a patient person :D 

     


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  • From Kristi_Lovett on March 05, 2018

    I really enjoyed your story. I would love further insight about Harry’s powers but with everything else going on I understand not getting too involved in that. It’s not his story after all. I’d recommend a free app like grammarly to check for grammatical errors. I use it all the time. Draco’s character development was very enjoyable. I felt some of Ginny’s ‘does he love me or bot’ teen drama feelings were a bit overused. She’s a strong woman and don’t see her with so much self doubt. I liked this wasn’t just some overly lude erotica like some I’ve stumbled upon here but also didn’t shy away from the fact that people are sexual beings. 

    I really enjoyed your work. Thanks for the time you put into writing it. I look forward to reading your other in progress fan fic. 


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  • From Teri1211 on June 29, 2017

    Loved it....... The character developement and interaction was amazing and believable,  The Ginny "possessed" was nail biting and intense.  I love Ginny and Draco as a couple and this is the first I have read with them together.  You are a wickedly talented author and I hope you write more.  Thank you for an exvellent read :)

     


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  • From Teri1211 on June 27, 2017

    I have been reading this all at once. I had planned to leave a long review at the end.  But, there was spmething in this chapter that touched me.  I am a trauma survivor and  have PTSD.  Ginny going to Draco after her nightmare is so much like me turning to my fiance when I have nightmares.  You are an amazing author. This piece is so mult-ilayered and deep.  The characters ring true,  but with new depths.  I love your Draco and what you have done with  him and Ginny.  Well done kudos to you.  Now on to reading more.


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  • From Marvolo on July 23, 2015
    Can't wait to finish it I just needed a break from the tention. It was soo good that I would read a chapter and suffer even worse insomnia then before. "I'm typing at 5 in the morning roughply so its bad." I can't wait to read the rest of it over the weakended
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  • From Marvolo on June 24, 2015
    Finnally caught back up. story is awesome, heart breaking and heart warming. I fear something bad is happening The way you described luna's mark it doesn't sound like a burn which is very concerning. No idea what going on but Harry might be in a bad place and/or Luna might be in a worse one......I can't believe i'm saying this but I don't trust her. I fear maor characters aren't surviving the story....don't let that stop you though.
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  • From Marvolo on June 15, 2015
    WOW JUT WOW heavy duty chapter. This story is amazing.
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  • From Marvolo on June 14, 2015
    Will try and not review too much but chapter 20 definitely puts this as one of my favorite stories on here great job. I hope this doesn't end too soon but am also interested if you have other stories planed and if so what will they be like.
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  • From Marvolo on June 10, 2015
    Great story Please keep up the good work. I'm completely uncertain of where this is going to end up and I love it.
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  • From Severus1snape on June 03, 2015
    I hate draco
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  • From valkyrie136 on June 03, 2015
    I was curious because I've never given Draco/Ginny any thought before as a couple. I think you have an interesting idea, but I couldn't finish reading because it was a little hard for me to follow. May I suggest smaller paragraphs? It can be hard to read when there is so much going on in one paragraph: dialogue, thoughts, and descriptions. I like to see it broken down a bit more, but if this is your style and you love it then don't change it!
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  • From magneto_acolyte on May 29, 2015
    Very good story so far and I am looking forward to more. Hope to see Draco-Ginny interaction.
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