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Reviews for His Fathers Mistakes

By : TheKitten
  • From katsplay68 on January 05, 2017

    WHAT'S NEXT!!!!!!  UGH  please finish.  (Begging on knees)


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  • From ANON - Mgriffith490 on March 06, 2016
    I really like this story please update it soon.
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  • From ANON - Rae on February 17, 2016
    Shut up and continue writing! ;-)
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  • From ANON - kimberlie on February 16, 2016
    OMG you need to write more and in a major hurry! im running out of stories to read!
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  • From ANON - Delia Cerrano on November 11, 2015
    Oh my poor Severus! But how does Harry get involved in this years later except as some one Severus would dislike because of the memory of this with James? I love this couple! They are my favorite "Harry Potter" couple.


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  • From etoile on September 11, 2015
    I love your verry firt chapiter.
    I can not wait to read chapiter 2.Please, can you tell me when you post the next chapiter.
    Thank you in advance.

    Grieve for possible mistakes ,but English is not my native language.
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  • From ANON - sheepcat on September 06, 2015
    Hi there! Interesting story so far, I'd really like it if you continued :)
    Though I have to say that you'd need a beta reader as there are many distracting mistakes that could be prevented.
    Other than that: you go, girl! :D
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  • From ANON - sheepcat on September 06, 2015
    Hi there! Interesting story so far, it really like it if you continued :)
    Though I have to say that you'd need a beta reader as there are many distracting mistakes that could be prevented.
    Other than that: you go, girl! :D
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  • From ANON - Cair on August 30, 2015
    Please continue this!
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  • From on June 30, 2015
    What a sad but intriguing start...anxicus to see how you develop this into a Severus/Harry story.
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  • From Jan on June 27, 2015
    This was a good start, however your going to have to look out for spelling, there were a lot of misspelling throughout the chapter, here are a few from the last paragraph: autopiolet is spelled autopilot, Fealing= feeling, fitfull=fitful; think about getting a beta, they'll help you with the spelling and more^_~ besides that, I'm looking forward for more updates ^_^ so please update chapter 2 soon.
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  • From fortheloveofDrizzt on June 27, 2015
    Very promising start. I am interested in how Harry and Severus get together after the mistake of James. I did notice a few spelling errors in the story. Just take your time when you check it over before you post the next chapter.

    -Drizzt
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