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Reviews for The Masks of Real Heroes

By : Aelys_Althea
  • From ANON - Silver on November 21, 2015
    Holy! Was that Remus at the end?! I can't wait to see if it is! And poor Draco! After I heard he lost his father I was heartbroken, but now reading about his mother, I'm glad she didn't die but ouch my heart. I'm really proud on how Harry is keeping it together. Can't wait for the next chapter.
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  • From Innocent_fairy on November 11, 2015
    The story is really good you should finish it
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  • From Jan on November 10, 2015
    Lol, I meant the glitch between Harry's Slytherins and Gryffindor friends at the beginning of their return. Please update chapter 19 soon.
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  • From Jan on November 02, 2015
    It's truly good to see them acting like before, but I wouldn't mind knowing why there was a weird glitch at the beginning to begin with.... Unless they thought that over the holidays their parents were going to forbid them from talking to them or something like that.... Please update chapter 18 soon.
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on November 02, 2015
    Wait, hold the boat, did they go to see the Eiffel tower TWICE in this chapter? At the beginning of the day Draco is looking up in wonderment and they are talking about the Eiffel tower and then like a page later Harry is saying they still need to visit the Eiffel tower O_o
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  • From ANON - Sera21 on November 02, 2015
    Okay I have really enjoyed your story up till now but I have to call bs on that day in Paris. I don't belive you have actually ever been to paris or you would know that one does not simply visit the Eiffel tower, Louvre, the Orsay, the gardens and Notre Dam IN LESS THEN A DAY. The Louvre is HUGE. It would litrally take a week to walk through the whole thing and while I expect they may have skipped some things there is no way you are spending less then half a day in there. And when you are done you are so OVER art you do not want to visit ANOTHER museum straight after. Its quite overwhelming in its volume. AS it happens I visited the museum d'orsay with my flatmates 2 weeks ago and I belive we spent 4 hours or so in there even though we skipped a whole level as well as the photographs. There is just no way. And Notredam had pamphlets in like 12 different languages at the door. And I'm pretty sure not everywhere in Paris is beautiful, there are alot of really dirty poorer areas epecially coming into the city. But I guess that a point of opinion. Sorry. It was just a bit unrealistic ^^
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  • From Jan on October 20, 2015
    Hope Harry doesn't decides to visit his uncle at the hospital. Please update chapter 16 soon.
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  • From ANON - EH on October 15, 2015
    While that was interesting, I feel that was a bit of a let down. You made a significant moment of closure (one that needed to happen for your readers who have come to empathize with Harry in particular) all about Narcissa and some faceless character that you introduced with a tiny bit of foreshadowing in 1-2 chapters (like sentences worth of foreshadowing). That's a bit of a rip off in terms of how you've built up the impact of these events on Harry and all of the people around him. I really feel a bit short changed by that. Just my opinion though.
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  • From Jan on September 18, 2015
    Will the Malfoy's find out that Harry's been raped, and abused? Please update chapter 11 soon.

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  • From Jan on September 01, 2015
    Let's hope that Harry will start getting better again, and not worst thanks to that curse, please update chapter 8 soon.
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  • From ANON - heartstar on August 27, 2015
    Oh wowwill they understand whatwas nappening were they.seeing the wounds? Hmm i await more when you can.
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  • From ANON - starr on August 26, 2015
    wow I can see Harry mixing well with Draco, in the way he grew up that would fit better....so in this Nevell is the boy who lived.. not seeing that at all....yea all the lions are as they should be , big mouths with no action behind it.....Thanks and hope to see more soon !!!!!
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  • From ANON - SlythindorMalfoy on August 14, 2015
    Thoroughly enjoyed it! The random laughter made me burst out laughing. :D. I thought it was perfect length. Waiting for more! :)
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  • From ANON - starr on August 14, 2015
    well that was the 2nd time I've read a story that Harry was not put in a house...which is good , to see what happens now with that ...winder how your going to make Ron and hermione act in this one also Draco he is already in shot so hopefully Harry helps him and himself !?!?!?!?
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on August 13, 2015
    Ah. I did wonder why Harry was able to live with an obscure uncle instead of the Dursleys with the blood wards. I am assuming that Neville took Harry's role as the boy-who-lived, whereas Harry's parents were killed some other way (or maybe they took the Longbottoms' place in the Janus Thickey Ward).
    I did wonder, after the first chapter, if this would be a non-Hogwarts story, and I am so glad it isn't :)
    I am very much looking forward to reading more soon.
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