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Reviews for The Rivalry

By : Pseudonymous_Entity
  • From Darkenedrose341988 on January 05, 2018

    Ooo~ update please?!


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  • From ANON - setsuna24 on November 06, 2015
    interesting to note that Ron's reason to confront Harry about Hermione and his defense of her is that "she grew up with muggles and doesn't understand about alignments and stuff"He conveniently forgets that Harry too grew up with muggles and didn't know he was a wizard until he got his letter just like she did and that ,unlike Harry, Hermione spends more time in the library than the Ravenclaws and had plenty of time to figure this stuff out if she had wanted to learn more about the history, culture, rules, and roots of the wizarding world instead of being so focused on trying to be better academically than everyone else and mother-hening her friends around. If she doesn't know these things it's because she didn't bother to learn them like Harry apparently did.
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  • From neilru2 on September 20, 2015
    ok, so im one of those odd ducks that like when storeys go into theory of magics and there reasoning for doing things like they do.... for the building and developing of things, be that characters, relationships, or just ideas..... i came on to this site for an interesting wank.... you gave me one of, if not THE, best description of dark/light magics.... thank you very much
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  • From ANON - Chester258 on September 01, 2015
    I really love this story. Keep up the great work!
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  • From ANON - Aelys_Althea on August 27, 2015
    I really like your story :) especially the dialogue and banter between Harry and Draco. It's truly fantastically hilarious.
    I think my family likely thinks I'm a little deranged for my sporadic laughter over the past hour as I've been eating my way through your story.
    Looking forward to more!
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  • From ANON - starr on August 14, 2015
    why hasn't harry told or shown Draco that band that Dubbledork put on him ??????? love this read it's refreshing !!!!!! thanks for the update and hopping to see more soon !!! :):):)
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  • From lordamnesia on August 13, 2015
    And bam, Dumble gets kinda circumnavigated! Keep up the stellar work!
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  • From Setsuna24 on August 12, 2015
    Chapter 18 and 19 are exactly the same.
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on August 12, 2015
    I am rather enjoying this story. I look forward to reading more :)
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  • From ANON - DinaTheCat on August 12, 2015
    Interesting. I like it so far :)
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  • From ANON - starr on August 12, 2015
    Another one that Dubblefuck is an ass !!!!!! good god Draco needs to help Harry out of this shit !!!!! poor Harry at least he knows now that Dubbles is a piece of shit !!!!!! OMG please update soon this is a great read so hooked !!!! :):)
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  • From lordamnesia on August 12, 2015
    This story continues to get better and better. Seriously, the best story I've read in a long time, keep up the amazing work!
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  • From ANON - starr on August 11, 2015
    so good wow this is awesome writing !!! hope now Draco helps him , since Harry was correct he has no friends they were and are all lyres keep it up so good !!!!!!!
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  • From lordamnesia on August 11, 2015
    Wow, just wow. This story is a fantastic start, I love this Harry and Draco, very much human and what they should have been in the books. Keep up the stellar work, I can't wait to see where this goes!
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