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By : BlackDawnRose
  • From ANON - Mia on April 10, 2016
    I do hope that Harry get's better.
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  • From ANON - Mia on April 10, 2016
    very good
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  • From Jan on March 12, 2016
    I can't wait to find out what's going on with Harry, please update chapter 8 soon.
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  • From ANON - phoenix-rob on March 11, 2016
    Amazing, just stumbled on to this story and really enjoying some of the characters being developed and portrayed differently than usual.
    What is 'wrong' with Harry, he needs to open up to Neville and Draco soon so that Neville can express his love more effectively.
    The Gryffindors need to be reigned in further and their punishment more public.
    Next chapter quickly please.
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  • From Jan on December 03, 2015
    Poor Harry, please update chapter 7 soon.
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 29, 2015
    Yes you're mean!
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  • From CDGaymer on November 28, 2015
    good chapter, so cant wait to see why harry rejected nev, and hopefully the can be together eventually.
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  • From ANON - Chianti-Piper on November 28, 2015
    I don't review often, but I love your story! There really does need to be more Harry/Neville stories out there! I also believe it here should be more slash stories with several others like Blaise, OMC's, - I read a really good one with Justin Finch-Fletchly, but it was taken down and incomplete. Same author did another one that was awesome with Marcus Flint. Just want you to know that this is an AWESOME story! Can't wait for next update!
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  • From Jan on November 09, 2015
    Lol, Neville's parents are so cool. Can't wait for chapter 6 😃
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  • From ANON - SlythindorMalfoy on November 08, 2015
    Yes three way!!!!!!! Plzzzz!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From ANON - Anon on November 07, 2015
    It's sick if ron gets to stay in school. He should go to prison
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  • From CDGaymer on November 07, 2015
    very good chapter, i hope harry will be ok.
    i wont mind if its dray/nev/harry or nev/harry, eaither would work. Or u could start it as Nev/Harry and bring Dray into it later
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  • From ANON - zsfantasy on November 06, 2015
    I love this story. It is very unique and keeps my interest. I love the quiet and shy Harry that you portray. I would like to see a Neville/Draco/Harry pairing. I think that it has been nicely set up. I also am hoping that Ron and the rest of the Gryffindors will be properly punished now that responsible adults are aware of the situation. Thank you for another great chapter.
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  • From cullengal101 on November 04, 2015
    hi
    brilliant story so far
    please keep updating
    just a little note on this chapter when they are all sitting in the compartment you have put talking about their summers. but they had just come back from their Christmas holidays. just thought you would like to know and also in chapter two when Neville is asking harry "do you only draw animals or other things too?" and harry replies "I draw other things too" at the start of the class you started out calling the professor, professor sprout but after Harry's line about what he draws you changed it to Madame pomphrey, and then went back to calling her professor sprout. again thought you should know besides that
    absolutely love this so far
    please update soon cullengal101
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  • From ANON - Anon on October 22, 2015
    lols. Neville is so 'gone'. Even with whatever issues Harry has, i think he is still a far better match for Nev than Dean was. I honestly can't see Harry ever condoning bullying... or cheating behavior.
    I wonder how long it will be before Nev realizes he's head over heels again?
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