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Reviews for Unlikely life

By : CrazyBitch
  • From PiffyEQ on June 05, 2016
    Yay an update!
    I am so glad that you are going to make this an mpreg! I am hopeful that once Sev gets 'cleaned up' that he ends up gorgeous. A Jealous and possessive Harry would just be hot.
    Looking forward to more!
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  • From PiffyEQ on January 28, 2016
    Poor Sev; he has such low self-esteem! I hope Harry can win him over ;)
    I'm glad you are continuing this story!!
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  • From ANON - 50_air_1 on January 19, 2016
    I realy like your story! But now you have updated i cant read it Amy more! Why is that???
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  • From Jan on January 03, 2016
    Poor Severus he still can't believe that he is Harry's mate, please update chapter 4 soon.
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  • From ANON - moodysavage on December 20, 2015
    I like the story idea and I like how the action moves along in the story but I had a big problem with chapter two. Severus was hurt by the soldier and then doesn't regain consciousness until four days later? If he was that hurt then Ron is an idiot for not getting Severus medical help. Four days on a horse? No food? No drink? No bathroom?! No stop at an inn? There definitely needs to be a wake up before they arrive at the castle where Severus finds out and disbelieves what is happening to him. And what happened to his poor faithful donkey!?


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  • From djaddict on December 16, 2015
    Lol. Poor Severus getting so overwhelmed.
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  • From PiffyEQ on December 06, 2015
    Sev doesn't know what he's in for ;)
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  • From DinaTheCat on December 02, 2015
    Your spelling could do with some work, but it's a very interesting premise, I look forward to reading more :D
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  • From ANON - Snack_Pack on December 01, 2015
    I just want to know who's topping who....^_^
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  • From ANON - PrincessCaraboo on December 01, 2015
    It's 'medieval' not 'medivial'
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