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Reviews for Through the eyes of a Serpent

By : Doragonkage
  • From MaryLiNda on April 29, 2021

    Great story, I really hope and you continue it, I loved your way of narrating, although after a while I will continue to hope that you update, you just left me wanting more.


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  • From TexasTurtle on September 27, 2020

    Thank you for writing and sharing your wonderful story.  What happens next?


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  • From Foop on July 11, 2017

    Good story, hope there will be more at some point even though its been a while


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  • From Calmzone1 on July 03, 2016

    Brilliant!  Can't wait for more!


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  • From ANON - HP1990 on June 12, 2016
    Just found this, and it's awesome! I love the way you really flesh out the characters and manage to really get me rooting for their wellbeing and for how their story will develop. There is only one minor thing that kind of confused me a little while reading, and that was in the scene where Harry was looking around for a store to go into, and also the scene in the first store. You hadn't yet explained that the blindfolds were slightly see-through, so I kept thinking that you must have forgotten that they wore them, because half the time they didn't lift up the blindfolds to look... Don't know if I explained that in a way that you understand(I'm horrible at explaining things) I also don't mean this in a rude way, just as constructive criticism.

    Looking forward to seeing how this continues!
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  • From Yaoifan on May 12, 2016
    Thanks for your work, I like it. I want to continued it.
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  • From pip on March 30, 2016
    Chapter One

    Well, that is interesting! So I like spontaeous combustion.. have you seen some of the photographs? It's horrific! *g*

    A very good start, and I wonder who this figure in white is, and if Harry will ever be back at school. Just goes to show, you should never ignore an infected wound.
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  • From ANON - momoko on March 29, 2016
    good story
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  • From ANON - Magsie on March 29, 2016
    I am in love thus far! I am enjoying the story and characters! I can't wait to read more!
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