Just finished my second re-reading of this story and I'm still just as - if not even more - enchanted by it as the first time around. It is one of the greatest fanfictions I've ever read, and I can't express strongly enough how much I adore this story and the fascination and pleasure with which I've read it twice now.

Given that it's been 2 years since the last update, I have little hope that you, dear author, will see this message, but on the off chance that it does - please continue this!

This has been a wonderful read. Your writing is a treat.  I wish you had continued it,  but I'm sure that by now it's been so many years you won't even read this comment! 

What a shame there have been no new chapters lately. I have been coming to check for updates :( Longstanding fan here :) In the past, I have skipped several chapters that were too dark for my liking so I am thoroughly enjoying Freya being back at Hogwarts. 

I'm so glad I saw this update!  I am loving this story!  I wish I could figure out how to bookmark and get notices on here... but I will keep on checking!  Freya is such an interesting character.

I am so enjoying this story, Freya is such an interesting character!!  I only wish I knew how to flipping bookmark stuff on this site.

Thanks for the new chapter!

What came out instead was, “I want to fuck you.”

 It's amazing! I simply love it...

Oh Yes...... Thank you for uploading the next chapter! I love it! My heart is aching because of Severus' emotional reactions.

Hey.

I honestly love your story! I'm impatiently looking forward to the next chapter for months!

Pleaaaseeee go on. I hope this won't be the end. 

Greetings

Annora

It's taken me three days to read this, and I really want to know what happens next! It's such a brilliant story and I'm hooked! 

Well damn Snape. Didn't know you had it in you.

OH thank goodness you're back at it! This story is delicious.

I am hooked on this story. It reads fluidly and is compelling. Eagerly awaiting updates.

I just read all 16 chapters and all I can say is - can't wait for next chapter! 

The story is interesting, thrilling and your writing style is really good. I'm waiting for new chapter with anticipation :)

I *HEART* chapter 13. Developing plot beatifully and I  must say you do have a gift to create and build up atmosphere - especially in the end when they use 'legillimens' the tension just  flows and I felt I can't read the words fast enough to get to the end :)  

And btw. I really enjoy the fact that they are actually married and noonne else knows. I always have to smile when they come with the little cheeky ways of calling each other wife and husband. I imagine a possible moment in the future when they come out as Mr. and Mrs Snape and everyone drops their jaw to the floor in utter disbelief. That brings me to my childish idea that I hope the story will finish as ,more or less, 'happilly ever after' I hope you are not planning to kill Freya or Snape off. (Having said that I hope you are going to write many more chapters before geting anywhere near such questions :) 

Thank you for your acknowledgement. So far it seems I am the only reviewer ho comes back for more :). Which is a shame because I think your story is worth reading and I am looking forward to reading more. 

 general rant warning (not directly relating to Spy vs. spy , though explaining my viewpoint)  ***Since last time I have browsed a few more stories on AFF and most of them were either the equivalent of cheap x-rated movies (understand no story just all sorts of sex). Or when it actually had a storyline and decent writing the characters had some serious mental health issues, were mainly involved in seriously abusive relationships (portrayed in a way that was trying to make them seem almost cool).I can't believe I would be the only person who fancies wholesome  characters who don't seem to be suffering from mental health disorders, don't enjoy abusive relation ships or have sadistic traits and power  misuse issues.  Knowing the impact of abusive relationships and the destruction they bring on peoples lives I really don't understand this fascination that seems to be very prevalent here. *** rant finished

 I like to read about wholesome inspirational  characters who love themselves enough to not to allow other people to abuse them. I like strong men and women who rule their own lives but don't nead to belittle other people to feel their own self-worth.  And also, like Snape, they don't need to pretend to be nice or likeable for other people  as they don't  base their self-esteem on their opinions.

(Yet it doesn't mean that a strong women can't allow a man to dominate her, if she wishes. Though it is a different kind of domination. It is not based on using victim's vulnerabilities to impose offenders selfish will. A strong women may *allow* someone to dominate her as a show of trust and enjoyment of momentarily giving up  responsibilities knowing that she could take her power back if she chose to any time. And this trust gives the dominating person even  more pleasure as they know the other person has willingly gave up their power (or body) into their hands but despite the temporary role play they have an equally strong partner in them.)

 I hope you will continue building your story with interesting plot and dialogues as you have been so far. BTw. I loved the adition of trejgul, so sweet :) And we did see a bit of a good guy in Snape too which was refreshing. Lets see if you can pin the balance between good and dark :) Personally, I am definitely not looking for sexual encounters in every chapter., I do enjoy erotic themes that are a part of bigger plot but I am not reading this with the sole purpose of gratifying my carnal desires lol.