This is very nice story! 

This story had me from 1st chapter to the last. I lost sleep over this one!!!!

All I can say is. OMFG this was a great story!

I am so appreciative of this work! It was amazing! The scenes were steamy, and the author did a great job of expanding on the world rather than just parroting parts of the world and adding sex. Parvati was a great character 

Absolutely amazing story! Totally captivating! Need a sequel!

compliance potion....just imperio her

Absolutely loved this story.... you write beautifully. The characters were really believable to the originals and I really couldn't put your story down! Currently reading the remainder of your posts.

thank you so much for this wondrous contribution :-) 

Ooh, this one was naughty. Enjoyably so....but woof. Snap and Hermione have turned into my absolute favorite pairing thanks to you and OO. I'm hooked, lined, and sunk.

I was putting off reading this final chapter as long as I could. I wasn't quite ready for it to end yet, but you wrapped it up beautifully with the perfect balance of humor and sappiness. I think you're an amazing writer and have absolutely loved all your stories posted here. ❤️

Bahahahahaha! I need George to tell me bedtime stories. What a great ending. I loved Snape and Hermione's kids too, and I'm so relieved that everything turned out all right. (Real life is so much less agreeable.) I won't repeat my character arc comments from last time, but I just want to say again how much I enjoyed this story. I'm not sure where I put it on my DS ranking list, but it did suck me in.

I look forward to oneshot Vati and whatever you come up with next. :)

RL caught up with me, and before I knew you posted two chapters. Well, this will be looooooong review

Chapter 32

yes you all do, hopefully the compromise will satisfy. - yup, yup, yup :D

I just love their speeches :)

informing her that ‘Headmaster Bulgy-Pants’ was very much looking forward to an intimate association with the ‘Student Body’. . . as soon as possible. - I love this bit <3

Since when had Severus begun laughing freely? And in company? - I'm simply melting

However, this time you will do as you’re told. Hands . . . off. - perfect! This entire part is a perfection. :)

He was utterly smitten with her. Spellbound. - can't stop returning to this part

Chapter 33

Writing has become a bit too therapeutic to leave for long so no doubt I’ll be back some time soon. - I hope so :D And I agree, writing IS therapeutic ;)

keep an eye out for ‘Vati’s Reward.’ - yes, please ;)

The way that George is telling their story to the kids is fantastic :) And like every "good" uncle, he's teaching them naughty words that would get them in trouble :D

“You don’t really want a snake, do you?” / “Like it.” The girl nodded. / “Sssss,” she hissed as she patted it gently with a finger before turning and heading back to join her brother. - I love this part to the bits <3 Then again, I do have a soft spot for...snakes :D

It was his word. / always - for some reason I connect word "obviously" with him more than "always". But ok, I'm weird that way ;)

Thank you for writing this story, and for keeping us on our toes, once again. Looking for Vati's Reward and something new....whatever your devious mind comes up with next I know it will be worth waiting and reading <3

DS,

So we have finally arrived at the end...

Mouldyvort -(!) hahahaha

“Well, first of all, he picked his nose so much that it fell off.” -DS one more sentence of this kind and I'll snort my own nose off! And will become a female version of Mouldyvort...

And:

Is a pussy a cat?” The girl peered up at him.

“Most of the time.”

“Why did he lick her cat?”

George stood quickly. “Because her cat liked it. Okay . . . time for Uncle George to go.” -Hahahahahaha, Dessie! What kind of stories do you tell children! Naughty, naughty you!

I was sad to see the epilogue, knowing it is the last bit of this delicious tale, but you made it so funny, that I can't help feeling satisfied. This was a very sweet ending. Perfectly lovely and lovingly perfect. 

Thank you for this story and I hope, that you won't be able to stop yourself from writing and will start a new story very, very soon -like every proper, obsessed person.

Love 

Fox xx

What a lovely and fitting ending to a great story. I know I've said it before but it really is your wonderful, fluent, flowing prose that makes this such a joy to read. Absolutely terrific stuff and I am eagerly awaiting more. Yes...it is a good thing that La Bush herself lives on Planet Kate or she would be a basket case living near my youngest brother. 'E's a nutter but has a degree from Oxford Dahling! Wishing you all the best in Oz...I'm off to the Grizedale Forest near Coniston (where I envisage Remus lived and  was bitten by Greyback) for a weekend of well-mannered frivolity at my mate's posh cabin and a Burns Night at the local pub tomorrow  night where said mate will play the bagpipes. Love Ali xxxx.

Oh my god this was amazing!!!!

Chapter 32.

Now she used her extraordinary magnetism to draw him in further, an enticing flexion of one eyebrow, a subtle twitch of her perfect lips as she ever so gradually . . . ambushed . . . his . . . cock. (I want to ambush his cock too!) It was never particularly well behaved even when separated from her by a considerable distance. But, now, released and held in her frighteningly confident grip, it was doing the reproductive equivalent of hyperventilating. And she was clearly preparing to resuscitate.  -Hahahaha I love this

his fingers trembled slightly as his thighs squeezed protectively around her  -mmmm this is truly yummy

It was the final act of defiance against the enchantment  -Yes! Show the Evil Voldie the last word is yours. 

I want us to be together—for a very long time. And that means building our relationship into our lives, not replacing everything that came before. -this is such a wise thing to say. I like it.

It was an amazing journey for the both of them. It changed from difficult, depressing and heartbreaking to beautiful, loving and passionate. 

I don't want the story to end. I enjoy the anticipation of each chapter too much.

Thank you 

Love Fox xx

I'm back in London. Grey skies, rain and Westminster chimes on a clock tower nearby. It's good to be home.

Fox