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Reviews for The Young Husband

By : razldazzl72
  • From sammysplace on January 15, 2013
    wheres part 3,4,5,6,7,8,9,10,and so on !!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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  • From xmenfreak119 on June 04, 2010
    Are you going to write more? huh? huh? Are you? Write more? Please? Pretty please?
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  • From ANON - kunitsu on January 01, 2007
    Wow that was great I loved it and that sex scene was really hot too. I like the way you wrote this, keep up the great work
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  • From ANON - briar on November 14, 2006
    You did an amazing job on this. You managed to rush through Harry's school years without making it seem rushed. Good job chap.
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  • From on April 11, 2004
    This is great you should write a sequel to it. Such as when Harry gradgraduated.

    Hecate DeMort
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  • From ANON - kittykat on March 06, 2004
    I enjoy your stories but you need to finish this one fast i want to know what happens.
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  • From ANON - Anothes on February 23, 2004
    It was a quite interesting story. However, I find the language a bit plain in places. When I am reading a story- be it fanfiction or actual novel- I enjoy language that paints clear images in my mind. There were words that were overused to a fault, and that failed to paint a clear image in my mind. Although the plot line was excellent, the story was not as excellent as I believe it could be if the language had been more descriptive.

    As I like to say, the language was digestable but certainly not palatable.
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  • From Dxinsider on September 27, 2003
    I love this fic!!! They make a cute couple!!
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  • From ANON - solarisstar on July 26, 2003
    I love it!!!! Wonderful, just wonderful!!!! Is there any more coming? If so, It would be an even better story!
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  • From ANON - Rene on July 17, 2003
    I loved this story very much but I did have one question if they been together for 2 years wouldn't Harry be 14 and not 15 because they got together when he was 12 so that would make him 14 or have they been together for 3 years. I wasn't sure so I thought I would ask. Most stories I seor gor grammer so I don't finish the story and this was the firt time I saw not poor grammer but a few errors and I was able to finish it so this was a very good story. Even with a few errors I don't always finish them but not with yours you keep us right there in the action and gave us a good story to listen to.
    Rene
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  • From ANON - Yve on July 16, 2003
    Very well written...BTW thank you for waiting until Harry was a little older and more ready, 12 would have been just a little icky. I think that this is a great story..hope you write more.
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  • From ANON - Ramsey on July 15, 2003
    That was.... dunno, I liked the story but the concept of men with boys is still a disturbing. On top of that the characters (except Ron) are severly ooc. Pity that. was was to grade it as a original (that is not a HP fic) I would say quite well. 7+
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  • From ANON - WittchWay on July 15, 2003
    Excellent story.
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  • From ANON - jordan on July 14, 2003
    Please write more soon.
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  • From ANON - chibikit on July 14, 2003
    That was so wonderful. I really enjoyed it and look forward to future chapters.
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