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Reviews for The Gift

By : TheLadyFeylene
  • From ANON - pamma on June 15, 2005
    That was so HOT! why does it HAVE to be the last time?! *sniff*
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  • From ANON - sticky footed tree frog on May 14, 2004
    I give this three thumbs up.
    very intertaining
    not a ton of errors
    not too unrealistic
    sweet &
    spicy

    remember, ask not what you can do for the frog but what the frog can do for you
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  • From ANON - Kitty-Rose on July 30, 2003
    I like it! :) I think Sirius and James are veovelovely together, and it seems like you agree!
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  • From ANON - Nocturnali on July 24, 2003
    Nice. I liked that. Interesting, it's usually Sirius/Remus. I like that pairing. A sequel maybe...?
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  • From ANON - SmutFiend on July 22, 2003
    *That* was fucking hot. You plainly said PWP so the second reviewer obviously has nothing to complain about, and interestingly enough has no fiction of their own that they'd share. I love how you went into the smut, it was original and hilarious. It was also incredibly sexy and I've become a huge Sirius/James fan (usually go for Sirius/Lupin). Keep writing these fion, on, that was fucking incredible.
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  • From ANON - sandy on July 22, 2003
    Your fic needs some work, it's just sex smut and not really a plot line. I don't mind slash, but maybe a better plotline might do it. other than that you should check over your gammar mistakes and continue with the story.
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  • From ANON - Ruri on July 21, 2003
    Excellent story! I'm not a big Sirius/James fan, but I still enjoyed it! The only problem was a few common grammatical errors, you might want to read over to catch those. But that aside, you did an awesome job, good work!
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