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Reviews for What A Man Really Wants

By : SexyMochaSpice
  • From ANON - mi on November 03, 2006
    Nice. But please put under HHr cathegory. It's easier to find.
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  • From ANON - m, on July 19, 2004
    can i just say that was just really bad. i mean i know that that was a pwp but it was just bad , do everyone a faver and don't write anymore trust me u can do it you are really really crap. i mean why has no one in this fic have any real feeling. please man kind and NEVER WRITE AGAIN. ok hope that was helpful. bye know
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  • From ANON - Anon on July 27, 2003
    emm needs a little work but otherwise ok :)
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  • From ANON - mariteri on July 27, 2003
    It was a good story idea, but your transitions need work. The flow of the story leaves the reader (in this case me) lost when you go from one short snippet to another. Keep up the writing. with time and practice I'm sure you'll work it out. Good luck.
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