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Reviews for Conquest

By : Natrasha
  • From Abbyroad on July 06, 2018

    You do realize that technically this is rape? The first time she was drugged, essentially given the wizarding equivalent of a roofie. Then she was taken against her will, and tied down, not once giving her consent. Just because her body reacted doesn't mean it wasn't rape. Rapists often try to make the victim orgasm. It helps them justify their actions, and makes the victim feel exceptionally worse for "enjoying" it. You come right out and say, "it's not rape or anything like that" but clearly there was nothing consensual here. I would change your labels if I were you. At least put non con in your tags intro because otherwise this is very misleading. Not trying to be a downer or anything, but lots of people are sensitive to such things and a heads up would be appreciated.


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  • From ANON - AnonReviewer on September 27, 2012
    I just read the first chapter and although its good there are some serious spelling errors that you need to sort here. :)
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  • From incognito on July 08, 2010
    "he knew she was thinking about her
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  • From incognito on July 08, 2010
    hm, seems like your writing is a bit rushed, with the mistakes I've come across (new instead of knew). Another example; "But he needed a way to get her where he wanted her," shouldn't it be "But he needed a way to get her where she wanted him,"? And why does Draco refer to her as mudblood if he wants to seduce her?

    If you don't have a beta, find one. If you do have one, get a new one.
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  • From margaritama on November 27, 2008
    I don't think Draco would ever ever ever let Crabbe and Goyle have Hermione - not when he's so obsessesd and why'd did she have to endure that - UGH - at least Zabini is HOT and then Theo is cute but Crabbe and Goyle - UGH! Yeah, not sure where the story is going but if I were Hermione, I'd file rape charges and tell Draco to go screw himself.
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  • From MythDouglas on July 19, 2008
    Question: How was Hermione a challenge for Draco if it only took him one night and a potion no less to get her in his bed?

    -Myth
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  • From ANON - MistressOfDarkness on March 09, 2008
    update soon
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  • From gabby1234 on February 22, 2008
    oh jesus awesome awesome awsome we need more stories like this please write more immediately its so awesome
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  • From JMFELTON on June 24, 2007
    Please update this fanfic. It's so different and quite interesting, ignore your flames. What a bitch!!!!!!, anyway please please update.

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  • From ANON - Anon on January 14, 2007
    Absolutely atrocious! Get spell check! Get a beta! Neville Longbottom, not Nevile. I mean seriously, learn how to spell. If you are going to use the character, spell the name right! I noticed your penname on here is Natrasha. Key word in that...TRASH! You should really take this story down, have a beta go through it a couple hundred times, and then put it back up. IF you are going to write, take pride in it. Don't just post drivel like this and expect everyone to love it. Because those that have eyes, and some sort of concept of grammar are probably offended by it! I know I am! I may just have to report this story...see if it can be taken down because it's author is entirely inept at comprehending grammar and spelling.

    Have a lovely day.
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  • From ANON - Yocum1219 on September 29, 2006
    Wow...smutty, but hot nonetheless! Let me know when you update!
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  • From ANON - ashling on January 03, 2006
    draco is a major bastard in this story but i like the way you made him stick to his character:D the only thing i dont understand is that one minute he wants to be nice and gentle and the next he's a jackass and wants to be rough. kinda scary what he does to hermione though, lol, great job! please let hermione have a good ending no matter who she's with cuz it would be embarrassing beyond belief if the whole school or aybody saw those pictures. update soon!
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  • From ANON - Kadajwannado on June 30, 2005
    Oh silly me
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  • From ANON - Jess on June 27, 2005
    Great storyline and sex scenes Love Draco here! Update soon, please!
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  • From ANON - Lettie on April 30, 2005
    Ahhh, I like your story A LOT!!!!

    And I like the way Draco is VERY charming one day and then the next day he is a dirty son of a bitch. -But he is still hot!!!!

    Keep writing, please...
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