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for Zephyr

by Zoe

person nesscafe
schedule October 17, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Oh wow! Another incredibly well writen chapter. I wish I was as gifted as you are with words! *sigh* I am so tickled about Annessa! sounsounds very interesting! Will there be any Hermione/Snape confrontations in the next installment? I can\'t wait for your next chapter as always!!! I can\'t wait to see where all of this goes!

Hugs,
Ness
person Lizski
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
This is absolutely fantastic. I really like the take you have on botin cin characters. This is a really fresh approach. Please update soon!
person Cold Comfort
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
well, now that you\'ve dispensed with the overuse of flowery words, the story is imminently more readable.
person Rilla
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
That was justrt-brt-breaking! You cover such depth of emotion. I love this.
person Barrie
schedule September 24, 2003 at 12:00 AM
The wording is sometimes a little rocky, but the emotions are strong and the characterizations excellent. There is potential here, keep going.
person nesscafe
schedule September 12, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Zoe, this is incredible! Your writing is just... Well, I just can\'t discribe how good this is! I love it already! Hope you are able to find the time to write more! And always listen to the plot bunnies! They are leading you in the right direction! I can\'t wait to see where you go w/ this!

Hugs,
Ness
person BeautifullyMalicious
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
AHHH! *bows down* I\'m not worthy, I O noO not worthy. Please email me when you update. Thanks.
person Darkfaith
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
I love the Dumbledore story...It\'s just a lovely thought about he and Minerva. I\'m intrigued, please update soon!
person Red Writing Hood
schedule September 11, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Who? Who? Who is alive...oh...MAN...dont leave us hanging...bring it on...Poor Hermione, I cried for her. Imagine after finding the man of your life and suddenly...nothing...I want more and soon please.

RWH
person Rilla
schedule September 3, 2003 at 12:00 AM
Nice start! Lots of mysteries. I like the idea of the story starting off after they have some history together.

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